if this was a story, would you read it?

Jammie- The girl who wants nothing more then to fade away into the shadows, to live a life alone. Ever since her father died and her mother took her own life she believes the world is against her and no one is on her side. Dose everything she can to piss of her aunt and uncle.
Dane- Maybe the only one who truly cares about Jammie. He wants her to be happy and would give anything to see her smile again. He grew up with Jammie and Griffin but always had more in common with Jammie.
Griffin- Jammie's twin brother, who, unlike her wants nothing more then to stay high schools star football player. He'll do anthing for his sister though and worrys about her more then he lets show.

    After the loss of thier father, Jammie and Griffin's mother took her own life to excape the world. With no where eles to go Jammie and Griffin are forced to move back to Ohio, were they grew up, to live with there aunt and uncle. Griffin quickly finds comfort in football; however, Jammie takes a different approach. She gets lost in a worl of dangerous activities. Dane, a childhood friend is scared for Jammie and will do anything to help her.