Would anyone like me to continue?

yes i think it will make a great story i think you should say about how karou and haruhi are only dating because they want to share the pain of the accident^^so they feel they carn't get close to anyone who can share there pain^^

YES DEAR GOD CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it so far and I'd be really upset if you cut it off, and when I'm upset, I get angry and go after peoples >:0 And if that's not reason enough, then it's that I really enjoy your story though I don't completely agree with it. I normally don't read and you have me hooked. Hrmm... annnnndddd, I think that you should make Hikaru really jealous and try his darndest to steal Kaoru's attention back. You could do that for a few more chapters even, of his progress/ attempts. Or, you could switch it up and even go to Kaoru's point of view so us readers get a better understanding :)