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is this any good? its called mind transmitted disease

wandering down this empty 'ol street
my heart's wide awake and you're just asleep

my mind rushes through all of the choices i've made

the earth quakes
my heart breaks
in just one beat

by the sound of my defeat
the trigger has been pulled by your finger

my heart has broken in two pieces that won't fit back together
because of you

and now you're saying you want me back
just hoping i'll fall again

then the trigger is pulled
i fall back down

feeling like i'm drowning in a mix of love and hate all over again

i try to ignore you
i'm just to gullable

i'm sick
i caught a mind transmitted disease

i fell for your stupid lies
mixed signs

i can't get you off of my mind
you're so manipulative

such a player
why'd i chose to listen
why'd i play your fool

you got me to let my guard down, again
 emmyliz13 posted over a year ago
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wolfgirl985 said:
That was pretty good I like it :)
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thanks!!
emmyliz13 posted over a year ago
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