they probably will.

After I post, tell me what U think

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"Tag your it!" The Gassman yelled as he slapped Nudge on the wing.
Nudge flew to Gazzy and yanked his shoe off "No fair!"Gazzy yelled as he tried to grab it back,
but he was too slow. "Where should I drop it?" Nudge said, "Ohh I know!!! The empire State Building!"She dropped it. "NOOOOOOOOO" Yelled Gazzy as he dove after it.
"Did you know that the empire state buliding has lots of-"I clamped my hand over her mouth Nudge is nice but once she starts talking, she can be more scary than Angel the 7 year old who can control people and read minds, I never told anyone but I just LOVED Angel she smiled at me then a rock hand tapped me on the shoulder I jumped a foot in the air (if thats possible)...........

love it even if i didn't read maximum ride (i probally should....) and have no idea what your talking about its really good please post again soon!!!!

Really good post soon

when are you post your next chapter?
from,you know who

people like your work!!!!!!

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"Where are you going?" Fang asked me, I thought for a moment........
"Landing, Iggy and stupid stuck to me like glue (Dylan) will be waiting for us there."

Just then, Gazzy came and said "Max! Max! I saw a crazy boy riding a pure black horse with wings!
Am I crazy???" "are you sure?" I asked "yes you better go and check."

So we went down and checked, if we did not Gazzy will be crazy and bomb something.
"Um Max......I think I see it too" Nudge said I said "Now the school is messing with horses? They must be crazy, really really crazy."
"No Blackjack, I am not giving you any sugar cubes." The boy said.
"Angel, can you pick up anything from the boy or the horse?" I asked
"Yes he can understand the horse and they aren't from the school."She said.

TO: Ricfan
他们不喜欢我写的。。。。。。一班吧

I don't know

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OKKKKK that crazy guy is riding a flying horse and is not from the 'school'.
That set off all of my inner alarms in my head, we should go check........
I looked at Fangs direction he shrugged. Fine "Ok guys, let's check Mr.crazy out."
Before we flew there, I yelled,"Angel go get Iggy and Dylan, then meet us where crazy guy is.
If you don't find us there, listen for my thoughts, ok?" "ok by!"

So we flew towards crazy guy.
When we arrived, I asked him "who are you and why are you riding a winged horse?"
He looked surprised and said "Sorry unless you can see through the mist, you would not have seen me."

epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic epic yes that discribes your story it is undeniablly amazingly epicly awesomely epic!!!!!!posty soonyo

Áwesome post soon

why write short chapters

Because I want to

you spelled want incorrect

Where M...Y.

I don't see it, and I did not edit it

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"HELLO!!! I think I CAN see though the stupid mist and ALL of us can."I snapped
"No you do not understand what is the mist ........WHO ARE YOU?"he asked suddenly asked.
"I was going to ask the same thing WHO ARE YOU." I spat
"Bye!" he yelled and then flew away, But not that fast.
"Well, that went well." Fang remarked dryly and I took this chance to punch him.
Then I sent Angel a mind message:
'Angel stay put, we are going on a wild goose chase and try to get some info.'
Almost less than a second, she sent one back:
'NO I WILL BRING IGGY AND DYLAN WITH ME.'
I groaned no no no no no no no no not Stuck to me like glue no no no no no no no
'FINE!!!' I thought back
"Guys, Angel wants to join the wild goose chase, lets wait for a sec" I yelled over the wind.(By the way, do you know how hard it is to stay aloft hovering above a cloud?
not so easy.)

niceee:) post soonz

Love it post soon

amazing as always!!! post soon!!!!

i HAVS SKOOL NOW AND RICKFAN AND I ARE STEALING THE LIBRAY COMPUTER
SO I CANT POST NOW AND I AM GETTING CAUGHT SOON

I got caught!!!!!

that was good!!

nooo you got caught noooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but that was pretty awesome that you stole a cumputer my school only has huge dinosaurs and camras every where *tear drop* well just post soon please!!!!!!!!!

I will post on monday because the time zone is probably different.

yaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! monday!!!!!!! ps 5:28pm in NE right now. post soon!!!

post! you dummy

post please

I am not a dummy!
i might tell everyone here your real name............

sorry, i really can not post my mother said no computer for the rest of the week cause i did not do piano

Don't tell my real name!

i will

hello anyone?

anyone who want to read this forum.I will tell fanforbooks to post!

post please i really want to read.

I cant im still banned from my mac book
I am risking another week of losing the mac book to look at fan pop

i will TRY to post on tuesday
OK.............?

post soon!!!

RickFan and I are going to school now
............Unless rickfan is not going to school today.......
O well
I guess I better go to school now!

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It thursday already

post please

now i have time i will post now

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Just then I made one of my famous snap decisions I choose to leave the flock and find crazy myself.
I said "stay here while I find him MYself!" and flew there myself before someone wants to come with me.

I flew on top of the buildings so it was easy to spot him and there he was!
I flew silently as I could (but fast) and when I was on top of him, I dived straight down and landed on the horses back the boy screamed and drew his sword ........

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Max was crazy to do this but why should I not obey the leader of the flock?
I heard beating of wings I pretended I did not hear it but in the last second I spun a hard kick at the person or horse.
"Hey what was that for?"someone shouted. Oh who I kicked on the neck was Max.
"I'll get you for that!!!!!" she shouted choking
"you will live" I shouted back
"Flock, this is......Peter Johnson???"Max asked/said
"PERCY JACKON!!!!!! YOU JUST SOUND LIKE DIONYSOS!!!!!are you a half blood?"
"yes I am a half blood half human half bird"I offered
"why did you tell him that?!?!?!?!?!?!?!"Max yelled at me
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Fang was crazy to tell Percy that
"I'll get you back for that too!" I yelled at him
Percy said "I better take you to camp"
follow him or not follow him
I'll go with follow him 'cause I'm just like that.
We followed him (his horse was fast by the way)
Then what I saw was the most beautiful place I ever saw.
"We are just in time for dinner."Percy said
so we followed him for dinner.
We had to follow the other camp kids and shove some of our food in the fire (were they crazy?)
"Let's see if you find out who are your parents are " Someone said I turned around and almost fainted there was a horse with a man connected to the head, the bottom half of his body wis a horse and his top half is a man. WOW!
I found out that everyone was looking at Dylan, I looked at him too and there was a thundercloud on his head and his whole body was outlined by white then, the horse guy said "hale, son of Zues Dylan something" then everyone was looking at me I looked where there were staring I had a fork on my head.
horse guy said"hale, daughter of posidon father of all horses Maximum Ride."
then Nudge screeched I looked at her,, her clothes had changed and the back was a really low cut, her hair was done and she had makeup on.Angel the same.
"hale daughters of aphrodite Angel and Nudge." said you know who.
then people were looking at Fang he was outlined by black and you know who said"Hale son of Hades god of the dead. "Then Iggy and gazzy had machines on their heads "hale gazzy and iggy sons of haphaestesus (spelling problem)"you know who said it.

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