The Heroes of Olympus Waiting

MCF2000 posted on Jul 03, 2012 at 05:33PM
Hey guys this is a fanfic. By me. And stuff. Yep. Soooo

Summary: It's about two siblings, James and Marie. They have read the PJO series and (like any of us) they wish they were demigods. Can't reveal anything more!!

Characters: James Akin, Marie Akin, Nate Johnsson, and basically everyone PJO and HOO

Rating: (I don't know what the ratings are!)

Disclaimer: Unfortunatly, Percy Jackson doesn't belong to me. It belongs to Bob! What it doesn't belong to him either? Oh, it belongs to Rick Riordan? Awwww, dangit.

Do I need to put anything else here?

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over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Hey guys (if anyone's reading this) I can't post now but I will post soon!
over a year ago fireyes said…
mischievous
Sure I'll just be waiting!
over a year ago DoTH said…
big smile
Post soon......................I hope you didn't get lost.
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
THANK YOU! (I was waiting for someone to comment to post :) ) By the way - Marie is based on me, James is based on my brother.

PROLOUGE

Marie
"JAMES!" I hollered. "What?" He answered, looking up from where he was sitting in the den (on the computer, as always). I ran in from the living room and held up my book, 'Percy Jackson and the Olympians: The Lightning Thief'. "You absoulutely, positively HAVE to read this book!! It is the AWESOMEST thing eveeeeeeeeeeer!!!!!" James groaned and rolled his eyes, "You know I'm not a big reader, M" "I know, but you will Loooooove this book! It is halairious, and awesome, and has lots of adventure, and it's awesome, and-" "Let me guess, " James sighed,"It's awesome." "Exactly!" I smiled. "Okay, okay. I'll read it." James gave in, "But I'm not giving you any promises on how long it will take me." I grinned triumphantly. "Here you go then," I held out the book, "I'm done!"

~LATER (that year)~

"Marie, here's your book back." James held out the Thief o' Lightning. "YOU FINISHED IT!" I squealed. "Yeah, yeah - I finished it." He replied. "Okay here's the next book!" James muttered something, but I didn't hear him. I was staring at the TV. "What?" James asked, "It's just a trailer." "Not. Just. Any. Trailer." I whispered, my eyes still locked on the screen. "It's for the Lightning Thief!"


Sorry it was short, but it was just the intro! I hope you like it!
over a year ago fireyes said…
Nice,post asap!
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
thank you! I'll post when 5 different people comment (not including me)!
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over a year ago percabeth1000 said…
worried
nice story... ok 2 comments... please post others peoples!!!!
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
smile
Thanks percabeth!

Here's a sneak peak for the next chappie!

JAMES

Our mom had us in the kitchen making dinner, when Marie flipped on the radio. The song "I wanna be a millionaire" came on. I started snapping my fingers to the beat, and Marie started singing. But - she had changed the lyrics. I listened closer as she kept singing

"I wanna be a demigod so fricking bad
See all the things I never had
Uh, I wanna be going to a new camp for me
Smiling by Perc and Mr D

Oh every time I close my eyes
I see 'bove my head are shining lights
A different monster every night!
I know the worlds thinking I am odd
But I'll be a demigod!

over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Ali you are, as usual, AWSOME. Tu must continue-daily!!! As in ESD
(EVERY SINGLE DAY)
over a year ago SilverOwl2233 said…
Nice!! Post soon!!
over a year ago fireyes said…
I love that song! Cant wait now!
over a year ago percabeth1000 said…
smile
post soon!!!!!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
Awesome love this forum post soon
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Lol
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Thanks everybody! I can't post tomorrow, I'll try the day after. I don't know, but I promise you I will post!
over a year ago darange said…
Oh my gods that was awesome and I LOVE THE SONG!!! haha You go marie!
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Thanks darange!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Lol!!!!!!! And Emi, *puppy eyes* post soon.
over a year ago 1999jacko said…
really good
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Ikr!
over a year ago 1999jacko said…
yeah cant wait until the next part is up
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Same. *whines*ALI POST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
I will! Just not now!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Aww *pout*:(
over a year ago FairyWizard said…
heart
;D
Awesome hun!
And like I love you so much!
<3 You never IM that you wrote a fanfic....
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Oh I guess I forgot! Guys I'm really sorry, I said I'd post today but..... Oh Idea! I'll need a co-author so lets have a contest! Write a chapter (don't do anything big yet - just with them at their house......but if you want to I guess just IM me first!) IMPORTANT!! Before you post it IM me your completed chappie!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I IS ENTERING!!!!


MARIE

Later that night, James was asleep but I couldn't follow. I was too excited. If, by any chance, We were demigods, we might be able to meet our idols. Just thinking about it made me grin from ear to ear. I got out of bed and turned on the lamp beside my bed, I grabbed a sheet of paper and started writing my would be adventures. Lets see, meet Percy, check, ride blackjack,check...







busy sorry

over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Good job, though if you turn out to be a co-author you must write longer chapters! But thats okay for the contest.
over a year ago 1999jacko said…
that one was cool
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Yah it was
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
sowy I no rules reader...
over a year ago 1999jacko said…
Im entering

later that night james was lay awake thinking about how hard he had tried to hide that he loved percy jackson he thought about that for hours until he heard marie fall asleep he then lept out of bed silently and started to act like he was a demigod going on adventures like Percy but he was Zeus's son and he would zap every monster that got to close he then started to write down his own percy jackson adventures making himself the hero and he would fight off the monsters easily and every girl in camp loved him he even had Percy as a close friends and then he saved the world from certain doom with the help of Percy after that he continued with pretending he was a demigod. Hours later he felt Marie looking at him her eyes wide open"You love Percy Jackson too don't you your pretending to be a Demigod... I knew it you do love them"Marie said a certain cockiness and then she said"Can we play this tomorrow? PLEASE" she whispered."oh okay"he replied. They stayed up for ages after talking about there favorite bits in it.



hope you like it
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
It good but just a bit of grammar to be fixed:)
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Thats what I said, it also needs some punctuation.
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Yesh Yesh it does.
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Mmmm-hmmm
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I is bored.
over a year ago fireyes said…
Yesh is such a queer word I prefer ~!
post soon!
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over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I like Yesh, Zat, Zodles and more.:( humph
over a year ago FairyWizard said…
heart
;D I want to enter
Woulda done it longer but I had to be with crappy family and friends:P
Give me like an hour.....or three.
:D or I can give you a sample of my writing?
over a year ago fireyes said…
Prob a sample.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I really like squigly!
but instead of zat I like dat.
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over a year ago FairyWizard said…
heart
;D what type of sample? Sample of a chapter I wrote for this or a sample of writing in general?
over a year ago 1999jacko said…
I am not a good writer because of my rubbish punctuation and spelling but usually im not bothered
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Lol
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Sample of chapter please!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Random official person(Ralph)-I am afraid you cannot join without a sample.
Me-What the heck when did you get here?
Ralph-Miss I am afraid your parents do not want you on this and would not approve of you saying the word 'heck'
Me-*Glomps Emi* You can't make me leave! PIPER MCLEAN HELPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ralph is here for good.:(
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Me-GET OFF OF MY FANFIC, RANDOM RALPH PERSON!!!
Ralph- *runs*
Me- Yay!! Now you can stay, Cinnomin!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Me:Ralph is stalking me everywhere
Ralph:*back* Yes I am
Me: *-_-*I give up
over a year ago MCF2000 said…
Sabastion -wise decsion.
Me- NOW YOU'RE STALKING ME?!?!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Me:...
Ralph:Speak when spoken too!
Me:What the-
Ralph-uh hum?
Me-HAY?
Ralph-Better.