The Heroes of Olympus The son of Neptune!!!!!!

pjfan1 posted on Dec 27, 2010 at 03:25PM
This is the 1th story I've ever written so go easy on me! And sory if I have spelling problems. I don't know English very well. Well I hope you enjoy it.
I am not RR and I don't own any of his characters.
I'll try and post two or three times a week.
It depence on schoolwork.
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over a year ago pjfan1 said…
Chapter 1
Percy
When I woke up I was under water. The strange thing was that I could breathe. I came out of the water and was completely dry. But where was I? And who was I? How can I not remember anything? When I was about to do a step a boy came from nowhere and stuck a knife in my throat.
,,Who are you? Are you a spy?” the boy asked.
From the bushes came a girl. She had curly brown hair and dark brown eyes.
,, Bobby do you need to fight with every newcomer?” the girl asked.
,,Don’t you think it strange that this guy appears from nowhere exactly when Jason disappeared?”
,,There may be an explanation.”
,,Well you heard Hazel. Start talking.” Bobby said, and dug the knife deeper in my throat.
,,Maybe if you remove the knife from his throat it will be easier for him to talk?” Hazel proposed.
,,So he can attack you?”
,,I can protect myself. Go and tell the Lupa.”
,,I will not leave you.”
,,Go!” Hazel commanded.
,,Okay.” Bobby muttered something I did not understand but I think it was in Latin and left.
,,Sorry. He usually doesn’t behave like that. By the way I'm Hazel. You are?”
I tried to think but it was very difficult.
,,It was the name of a famous Greek hero but I don’t remember.”
,,How can you not remember your name. Do you remember anything?”
,,Almost nothing.”
,,This is not good. So a Greek hero.” She thought for a moment.
,,Theseus?” Hazel suggested
,, No.”
,,Jason?” she barely said the name.
,,No?”
,,Perseus?”
,,Perseus? Perseus? Yes this is. That is my name but I think I prefer to be called Percy.”
,,Well Percy how did you come here?”
,,I don’t know. I woke up. I was in the water and then hit the shore.”
,,But you're dry so how were you in the water?”
,,I don’t know?”
,,Okay. Let’s continue. Come with me.”
Hazel went and I followed.
,,First” she started to explain ,, It's training camps for the demigods. Demigods are ...”
,,Half-human half-gods.” I consumed
,,Well don’t know where you know that. So we don’t know who is your god parent so you will stay in the Mercury cabin.”
,,Hermes.” I corrected her.
,,Not it’s Mercury. Look when the Romans defeated the Greeks the Greek gods died with them. But the Roman gods are alive.” Hazel explained.
It didn’t seem right. She kept explaining about the camp and showed me the cabins. All were different but that whit the color of the ocean and sticked with seashells was the one that most attracted me. I went to it.
,,I wouldn’t go there if I were you.” Hazel stopped me.
,,Why?”
,,Because these three cabins are for Jupiter, Neptune and Pluto. They have no children. Except for Jason of course. They are only built to honor them.”
I was just about to ask her who is Jason when two girls came to us. One had long straight brown hair and blue eyes. And the other one had long, curly blond hair and gray eyes. As soon as I looked at her and I thought of another girl who looked like her. Annabeth. Her name was Annabeth.
,, Percy this is Gwen daughter of Mars.” She pointed at the girl with brown hair and blue eyes.
,,And this is Reyna daughter of ...”
,,Athena.” I consumed
,,No it’s Minerva but I guess that the Greek version is Athena.” Reyna corrected me.
,,And who is your god parent?” I asked Hazel.
,,Apollo.”
,,And yours?” Gwen asked.
,,He is indefinite.” Hazel replied.
,,So you have to see Lupa. I saw Bobby coming out of the house.” Gwen said
,,Yes I sent him there.” Hazel said.
,,Once AGAIN he got in a fight with Cyrus.” Reyna said.
,,Who is Cyrus?” I asked.
,,Oh she’s a daughter of Trivia.” Hazel answered me.
,,See you in training.” Gwen said
And we headed for the house again.
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
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AWESOME i luv it lots of suspense btw i hav my own fanfic plz read it wht bout dakota i am goin to make her in my Next chapter. anyways U WERE AWESOME
over a year ago pjfan1 said…
laugh
I might add her in the next chapter but I don't know. After all she's going to be the oracle. But don't tell anyone :) :) :)
over a year ago NicoDiAngelo4 said…
i love it <3 i read it earlier today...but it didnt post my commment =/ but now it will...hopefully
over a year ago NicoDiAngelo4 said…
yep it did this time yaaaaaayyy
over a year ago wisegurl said…
angelic
O good job but ur soposed to put quotes ", not commas ,,
over a year ago UnoriginalName said…
Thank you for making me read this fanfic, because I probably would not have otherwise, because it is hard to get noticed (Well, not really). It was extremely well done, but please listen to wisegurl, it is supposed to be only "Quotes", and not ,,Commas and quotes"
over a year ago percyJlover121 said…
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your story is good so far! i dont post my stories that much and i read a lot of fanfics, but yours is good! :)
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
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plz read mine percyJLover121
over a year ago percyJlover121 said…
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i did, and i love both of you guys stories!
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
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thx!?!!!!
over a year ago Wisegirl123 said…
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Good job, nice beginning. No offense but you kinda rushed into it. But, then again, i did in my fanfic. Go fast i mean. Overall good job!
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
wink
I luv ur story but I do agree with wisegirl123
over a year ago NicoDiAngelo4 said…
POOSSSTTT SOOON !!!
over a year ago pjfan1 said…
Sorry but I can't go slow. I want the two camps to meet in this book because I want Nico to have a Roman girlfriend. Btw: can you guess who she is? don't get mad but the story will go fast.



Chapter 2
Hazel
Percy and I got to the house. I came here many times but each time it seems bigger.
”It’s beautiful.” Percy said.
”Every time it becomes more beautiful. Let’s go.”
We entered the largest room and there Lupa was waiting for us.
”But she is a …” Percy started to say.
”Wolf.” I consumed.
”You must be the hero who came from nowhere.”
”Percy.”
”I guess Hazel told you the principal.”
“Yes.”
“I guess you think everything she said is wrong.”
“Yes but how…”
”I know because it’s true. You shouldn’t be here.”
”But he is a demigod. Where else can he go?” I interrupted.
”I swore in the river Styx not to say but unless he doesn’t go to a quest he has to stay here.”
”But ...” Lupa snarled which means that if I continued to speak I will have trouble.
”You go to training.” Lupa told me and then turned to Percy.
“And you young hero Cyrus is waiting for you. She will show you where Hermes cabin is.”
When we came down Cyrus was waiting for Percy. I went for training. Why did Lupa said Hermes? He died right? I'd ask more questions if I didn’t meet Dakota. She looked very worried.
”What is it?” I asked her.
”There is a new prophecy.”
”What?”
“The son of sea who has a lot of might
shall go with someone who can fight.
With them shall go the sun and brain.
Together more power they will gain.
With the other chosen ones
shall go someone that carries wands.
When time comes they will go.
They’re leader will be the cursed soul.
They will go to a place unknown.
There they won’t be alone.”
“This is the longest prophecy ever spoken.” I said.
”I know. This means that it’s important.”


Sorry this chapter is shorter than the 1st one. Plz tell me what do you think about the prophecy plz.
over a year ago wisegurl said…
angelic
Ya the prophcy was kinda long but still good..
over a year ago NicoDiAngelo4 said…
yeeahh, prophecy was a little long, but it doesnt mean that its not good!! (i liked it) oh my hizzle fo shizzle!!! Nico gets a girlfriend!!! yaaayy (too bad it cant be mee) aww.... :(
over a year ago wisegurl said…
smile
Maybe u can be is secret girlfriend:)
over a year ago tessa34567 said…
cursed sole thats percy
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over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
mischievous
its good but the phropecy could b shorter
over a year ago pjfan1 said…
crying
Chapter 3
Annabeth
"Hey, Annabeth will you help me with the blueprints." Leo shouted.
"Coming. How is the ship?"
"Very well. These Romans won’t know what hit them."
"Leo we will not kill them."
"I know. I’m just saying it is very likely to hit their camp."
"Try not to do it."
"I'll try."
"Annabeth." Rachel cried.
"What’s up?" Rachel.
"I dreamed the oracle of the other camp. She made a prophecy."
Rachel told me the prophecy.
"The son of the sea. Do you think that it’s..."
"Percy? Very likely."
"This means that he’s alive right?"
"I don’t know. They may still be unaware that he’s the son of Poseidon. They may not know that he’s Greek."
I hoped Percy is well. I hoped he remembered ... at least me.
"Who are the rest of the prophecy?" Rachel asked.
"I think Jason will know. I’ll go look for him."
I went into cabin 1 and there was Jason.
"Jason can I ask you something?"
"Sure."
I told him prophecy.
"Hmm. Someone who can fight. This might be Gwen or Bobby. They’re both children of Mars."
"And who are the sun and brain?"
"The sun is most likely Hazel. The brain – Reyna."
"Someone who carries wands. This must be the child of Hecate right?"
"I don’t know. I don’t remember a daughter of Trivia."
I noticed that he said a daughter but I couldn’t ask him because at that moment Piper came.
"Butch and Blackjack returned. They have news about Percy."
Piper, Jason and I came out of the cabin and saw Butch and Blackjack.
"Annabeth we found him but ..."
"But what?"
"We saw him in the sea. We tried to approach but we couldn’t. Seemes to have an invisible shield around him."
"It doesn’t matter anymore." Everyone looked at me surprised. Even I was surprised by what I said.
"The prophecy. Go to a place unknown. Must be a Camp Half-Blood."


1st: I tried to make it longer but I couldn't.
2nd: It's New Year soon and we're going to have guests so I'm not going to post this week anymore. I'll try and post Saturday or Sunday.
3rd: Next week christmas vacation is over :( so I'm going to school :( and I'm not going to post very often :( SORRY
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over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
laugh
It was GREAT but i got confused we didn't read the phropecy again and who's POV was it
over a year ago Calypso0 said…
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that was really awesome! keep going!
*GreekRULES515 it was Annabeth POV, I think.
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
surprise
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over a year ago partypony said…
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that was awesome! the prophecy was also great, and long. alot must have been happening. more!!!!!
over a year ago PJhero02 said…
yeah these are really good so far!!! can't wait until you post again! first on the page!!
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over a year ago NicoDiAngelo4 said…
that was sooooo good =]] and wisegurl: yep, deedinately im hissecret girlfriend!! shh, dont tell any1 its a seret=]
over a year ago wisegurl said…
angelic
Sshhhhhhhhhh..............
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
cool
I LIKE PIE IM YELLING HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAH­HHH­HHH­HHH­HHH­HHH­HHH­HHA­AAA­AAA­AAA­AAA­AAA­AAA­AAA­AA o right we hav to b quite shhhhhhhhhh Greek
over a year ago wisegurl said…
angelic
No we were telling everyone not to tell about nicos secret girlfriend!!!
over a year ago Aphroditeskid21 said…
Hey pjfan1 you ask me to read it and tell you what i thought i think that this story is great i think the Prophecy was good as well and i like that it shows CHB's POV and write more and i will read more thanks i like the story alot
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
meh
its not a secret if u just told me tht u dumbo girl *shaking head*
over a year ago RomanGreekDemi said…
that's not very nice...
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
worried
IM SORRY WISEGURL (im not b ing funny i mean it sorry)
over a year ago NicoDiAngelo4 said…
wait did u call me or wisegurl dumb?/ if u called wisegurl: thats so mean!!! and if u called me dumb: vene though ive been called it before, its still mean!!1
over a year ago Aphroditeskid21 said…
R u done with this FanFic
over a year ago pjfan1 said…
I am not done with the fanfic but my computer broke-sorry. P.S. I am writing this from the computer in my school. I'll try and post 3 chapters at the end of the week.
over a year ago pjfan1 said…
I got my computer fixed. Sorry but I couldn't write 3 chapters but I really like this one I hope you like it too.



Chapter 4
Percy
Тhis is how my dream began. I was in an underwater palace. On the throne sat a man who exuded a lot of power.
"Percy. Is that you?" The man asked.
"Yes. And you are?"
"So Hera really did it. She took everything from you."
"What?"
"Don’t you remember me?"
"No. And should I?"
"Yes you should. I am Poseidon. Your father."
I can’t describe how I felt. Here I am without having any memory. Without knowing where am I. And suddenly, a man who says he is Poseidon tells me he is my father.
"Maybe now it seems to you impossible but it's true. You are my son and I am very proud of you."
"You should be. I am a child who doesn’t remember anything."
"I’m not talking about that. Look you shouldn’t be in that camp. It’s for children of the Roman gods. You are a child of a Greek god. You must be at Camp Half-Blood."
"What is the difference?"
"Big but now it’s not the time for that. At Camp Half-Blood you have many friends. And one special girl ..."
"Annabeth!"
"Yes. It’s important for you to remember that you're the son of Poseidon not Neptune. Also the one who has disappeared from the Roman camp - Jason. He is in Camp Half-Blood. He’s fine but you’ve trade places because of Hera’s plan. And remember this information ..."
My dream changed. Before me stood a woman who was asleep. Though she didn’t twitch her lips she spoke.
"You must be the miserable son of Poseidon."
I tried to argue but I couldn’t speak.
"I don’t understand why he has so much hope for you. Remember Perseus Jackson you will die from my hand."
I woke up. I was in Hermes cabin. I wasn’t afraid of the sleeping woman. I was afraid because I remembered everything. I should not be here. I had to be at Camp Half-Blood. With my friends. To see Tyson. And Annabeth ...
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over a year ago Poseidon3 said…
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Awesome chapter!
over a year ago PJhero02 said…
great chapter!!!
over a year ago AltPercyU said…
Great job of including Posiden like that!
over a year ago PercyJackson7 said…
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keep it coming
over a year ago GreekRULES515 said…
kwlio chaptery
over a year ago pjfan1 said…
Chapter 5
Hazel
I headed for Mercury cabin when I saw Percy come out of it. He looked worried.
”What's up Percy?” I asked.
”I remembered.”
”What?”
”I remembered. I remembered everything.”
”We need to talk to Lupa.”
”No.”
”What? What do you mean no?”
”I have a feeling that she already knows everything. And if I say what I remembered I'll be dead.”
“Come on it can’t be that bad. So what did you remember?”
”We can’t talk here. Where can we be alone?”
We left for the forest and reached a lake.
”Now tell me what did you remember.”
”This is not the only camp for demigods.”
”What do you mean?”
”This camp is for children of the Roman gods. But there is another camp- for children of the Greek gods.”
”Percy you’re talking nonsense. The Greek gods dead long ago.”
”Then how am I a child of a Greek god?”
“And who is he?”
”Poseidon. My father is Poseidon.”
”That’s impossible. Neptune has no children.”
”I am not a son of Neptune I’m a son of Poseidon.”
”Even if it’s Poseidon Jupiter, Pluto and Neptune can’t have children after the World War 2. Only Jason makes an exception.”
”That’s not true.”
“What do you mean that’s not true?”
”I know other children of these gods.”
”And who are they?”
”Thalia - daughter of Zeus. Nico and Bianca - children of Hades and Tyson – son of Poseidon but he is a Cyclops.”
”Then why don’t I know them?”
”Because they are at Camp Half-Blood. And Jason is there.”
”But this is impossible. This place doesn’t exist.”
”It exists.” A familiar voice said.
Cyrus materialized next to me.
”Cyrus.” Percy said.
”Yes. And Hazel he tells you the truth.”
”How so?”
“I knew about this place long ago. I even told Jason.”
”And you didn’t tell me?” I was angry.
”I told Lupa. She told me not to tell anyone but I already told Jason.”
”So all of this is true? Jason is in the other camp?” I asked.
”Yes, and Percy you must not tell anyone or you will die.”
”I know. This will remain between us.” Percy said.
”Wait a minute. I still don’t believe that Percy is a son of Poseidon.”
”Really?” Cyrus asked and pushed Percy into the lake.
”Now get out.” Cyrus commanded.
Once he got out of the water he was dry. There wasn’t a drop of water on him.
”Now do you believe?” Cyrus asked.
over a year ago sunsanj said…
soo wait..cyrus is the err son of trivia rite? or am i wrong?? and yeah i lyk it wen a story moves fast =) =)
over a year ago pjfan1 said…
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Actually Cyrus is a daughter of Trivia. She's a girl. But yeah you got the Trivia part right. Even I forgot who her parent was when I wrote the chapter :) :) :) And I'm not kidding!!!
over a year ago PJhero02 said…
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great chapter!! i love that percy remembers everything now!!
over a year ago PercyJackson7 said…
cool
that was awesome!!! keep coming with your awesome chapters
over a year ago Rachel-E-Dare said…
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this chapter made my day keep on writing
over a year ago Miss_Zeus said…
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I love it