Ok so time for the first chapter.



Daniela`s POV
Chapter 1
Hi!My name is Daniela!I am a demigod daughter of Persephone and Hades.
Being a daughter of two gods is very rare and makes you immortal but I usually don’t talk that much about that cause it just makes me feel like
I am not normal.Well,im not normal cause the whole demigod thing but
a girl can dream,right?I live at camp halfblood.My only friend right now is a
nymph called Ely.Today we were at the dock waiting for lunch to begin.

But alas,today wasn`t going to be a normal day…there was some news in store.But anyways,we were at the dock and we heard somebody screaming.

The screaming came from the woods so we got up,and went into the forest.

When we were there we saw him and it…



ugh i hope the comments arent that bad...well if i get any

the beging is great. i loved it , but u lift me hanging at the end what is it and who screamed, ahhhhhhhhhhh! am going dy of u don't post sooon plzzzzz oooo and how old is she? what does she look like? can u put a pic on of Daniela so i can seeee plzzzzzz

ok that comment made me cry and now i wanna post right now...but i dont know if i should.

oooo yes plzzzz and did i make u feel bad of so am sorry

actually that comment really made me happy.

so if you insist...


Daniela`s POV
Chapter 2
It was that guy,Sam,he seriously bothered me.Everyday he would show
Off at sword practice.He always thinks that his so great just because he
Is a son of zeus,the all powerful god.

Im pretty sure I could beat that boy one day but I never really tried.

So he was in the woods fighting what seemed to be a,uh.What do you call them?A dragon?No a drakon!Thats it!He was fighting a drakon!I decided I should help him but I knew he would just beat the thing and everyone would think that his so great but my opinion is…his not!

not so great but i tried.

Good I like it <3

i loved that one too will Sam and Daniela go on a quest togther?
and someone else??????
this is to good. what does Sam look like? how old r they??

hmmm questions are fun.
well i wanna make something like percy jackson so i want everyone to be kids so they are like 11.
sam is a boy with blonde curly hair and striking blue eyes.since he is a son of zues.
the other questions will be found out later on in the story

daniela-just like my profile pic
ely-blue eyes and skin and pink pig tails.
oh and if anyone wants me to put another chapter right now,just ask.
for tomorrow.

yes another chapter plzzz

ok just one more for today

Sam`s POV
CHAPTER 3
Ok,I get it!I have showed off a couple of times,but I still could use some help with stuff!
This morning I was just practicing for Capture The Flag and this Drakon came out of nowhere!After that this two girls showed up and just stood there like if nothing was happening.
“Uh,a little help?!”
“Hmmm let me think-No!”the girl with brown eyes said.
“Why should we?”another girl with blue eyes said.
Yeeesh,why are they so grumpy?
So I decided I should just do it myself.
I raised my sword and went back to fighting.

hahahahahahaha they said no

Wait I thought Sam was fighting the thing. Who's Jake?

oh man wrong name!

fixed it!
hmmm.should i post 2 or 3 chapters tomorrow?

3 chapters plzzzzz

So 3 chapters a day will keep my pain (not)away.
But Im still gonna try!
But Im not gonna put the chapters together.
maybe one after a few minutes.

Daniela’s POV
Are you kidding me?Help?He wants help?But I wasn’t going to be so nice like my mom,well as nice as my mom can get.Or too mean like my dad,who surprisingly has a soft heart when he is near his kids without other demigods.
I have a rainbow bracelet that when I take off my wrist,it turns into a celestial sword on one side and on the other side its supposed to be gold but is painted with a design that looks like blood.I find it so odd but cool at the same time.So when I want it to turn back to a bracelet,I just say,”1,2,4”the reason is that I really hate the number 3.I just don’t!
So I took off my bracelet and voila!A sword!Its name is ataktos which means mischievous but don’t ask why!I started going towards the monster when-

chapter 5 Ely’s POV
I stopped her before she could go anywhere.
“Your not really going to fight it right?”
“Well what do you want me to do?Stare at him getting hurt?”
When she said that I was about to giggle.
“Yeah why not?”
She stared at me with a face that said”you need some help”
Well I don’t need help! I am normal!
“What?”
“You aren’t normal!”
“I never said I was!”
“But I know you thought you were!”
After that she just went and ran to the drakon.
Well I don’t really think she knows how to use a sword cause I really never saw her use one because she just doesn’t train in front of people.
By the looks of things,she was doing pretty good,but not as good as me of course. Actually I don’t know how to use a sword but im sure that if I tried I could be good at it.

Daniela’s POV
I was just using my techniques that I know.I usually train in the hades cabin when nobody is there and im all alone(like always).So I kind of know how to use a sword.But I was just doing my best!
I have powers that are very dangerous that’s why I don’t use them. Well usually because I don’t know how to control them.
When that drakon was just thinking that he could win I didn’t know what to do and plus Sam was staring at me like if I was doing the weirdest thing ever.
“what?”
“you are doing it all wrong!”
“what?”
“you don’t hold the sword like that”
“dude,we are fighting a drakon and all you can think about is how to use a sword”
“well its pretty funny when you do it wrong”
“jerk”
Well that was probably the kindest thing I could say for him.

I LOVE IT PLZZZZ POST SOON

well i dont think ill be able to post today but i promise that ill post tomorrow.
but anyways if there are any questions i can answer just ask.
and uhhh.

y can't u post today?

hmmmm iguess i can do one chapter today but tomorrow ill go back to my usual 2 or 3

Sam`s Pov
Im telling you,this is one of the funniest fight ever!I mean this girl-wait whats her name?
“Hey whats your name?”
She stopped attacking(well she was fighting better with all those tips I had to yell at her on how to hold the sword)and turned towards me.
“Daniela but you can call me Danny”
Ok so this girl Danny,she was like all maniac on that monster.She used the sword way wrong,just as I have said before and had a scared face that was hilarious.
“…your face….”
“whats wrong with my face?
“….your scared…”
Ok so I just spit it out. Im not very good at keeping comments to myself and she started getting a little mad by that comment.
“well how about yours”she said.
I blinked.
“well im,im not scared,well not as much as you”
She was mad,again.
I think her face started getting as red as a tomato and so were…her surroundings.
My vision was going red.All I could tell were the colors of her eyes.
Blue,no wait weren’t they brown,now violet,green.and they stopped changing at red,the color of blood.
I felt a shiver go through me.
I started shaking my head trying to make it go away and when I stopped I looked to see the monster gone and two girls staring at me.
“You shouldn’t have done that”the nymph said.
Then Danny just dropped to the floor. The next thing I knew,the Apollo kids were coming.
They started taking her to the infermery but before they took her I up to her and managed to get one four lettered word out of her.
“jerk…”

I just love that word.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! sorry... but that was AWESOMMMMMMMEEEEEEE hmmmm but how did her eye color change? hummmmmmmmm thats awesome like all waysssss

@dezzypoo-your very kind and thank you!
Daniela’s POV
Chapter 8
What happened?
All I remember is Sam calling me scared and then we started a small fight,I got mad and I just don’t know but everything changed. I was in a different place walking with a girl with brown eyes and brown hair like me. She looked like me but not in twin way,it felt like I knew her. We were walking down a narrow path and then we stopped and she turned towards me.
“How has your life been”she asked.
“…who are you?”I asked.
She started laughing.
“silly,im your…”
After that my eyes sprang open. I don’t even remember closing them. I was in the infermery with Ely and Sam.
Let me tell you one thing.I seriously hate the infermery. Its one of my least favorite places. It reminds me of death.I may be a daughter of Hades but I don’t want to die and you probably don’t want to either.If I die im gonna be stuck with dad for a long time. I don’t really enjoy the underworld. I don’t hate it but it always has a weird smell and you always regret going there,but of course your going to have to go there some time around.
“ what happened?”I asked rubbing my head.
“uhhhh well uhhh you uhhh you”sam replied.
“you got mad.”Ely said.
“so what?”
“Lets just say it wasn’t pretty” Sam said.
Chiron walked in.
“hello children”
“uhhhhhhhhhhhh”this time we all said together.
“I heard of what happened and…”
“it was her fault”Sam pointed at me slowly walking out of the room.”She did everything!I could have handled that drakon all by myself”
Ha!Yeah right.
“Sam stay.I want to talk to you guys about something”
Oh I hope this wont be about forgetting to go to archery training yesterday.
“its about the past and what is going to start happening.”
Silency.
“I need you guys to also do something because this may involve you three”.
Well this sounds great…


okay im gonna only do one today because the more a day i do.the shorter they are.

WOW!!!!!!! SHE is GOING TO HAVE to be stuck with sam. but i LOVED IT when sam said it was her falt i was like "WHAT? U CAN NOT HANDLE THAT DRAKON BY YOURSELF!!"

Ely
Chapter 9
Ok so once Chiron started the story I was probably shaking
“You see kids,about 150 years ago..”
Dang.
“the oracle made a prophecy…”
What is up with the oracle always making great propechies a long times ago.
“about two big three children of the gods going to be on a quest that envolves death…”
At that part Danny’s eye twitched.
“Two big three shall leave
To see the big tree
That will never live
To begin a destiny of faith
While finding secrets that will never be revealed”
Yeeesh that poem was horrible and not understandable.
“ this prophecy has 5 parts to it…”
5! Please don’t tell me we have to hear more right now!
“but I wont tell you the other until the time has come”
Yay!
“But now I need you two to go on a quest for me to profill this prophecy”
Then why am I involved in this!
“the nymph has to come too,she may serve for help”
Thanks that was a nice way of saying it.
“NO!”Sam and Danny yelled at the same time.”IM NOT GOING ON A QUEST WITH..”
“If you don’t your lives maybe in danger.”
After that they just calmed down but I could tell they were still screaming inside.
“So what do we do?”I asked.
“I have a map for you.but you must find it.”
We all groaned at that part.

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AWESOME. I love the word too AWESOME UR CHAPTER IS.





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This is creepy because i have a friend named sam who is like the opposite of this sam .....

Next chapter....

Sam
Chapter 10
NO!NO!NOT A MAP! Well maps can be helpful but looking for a map will just make this worse! I don’t wanna look for it!
“A map?why a map?” ely asked.
Well maybe to help us out. I mean seriously we should at least try to look for it.
“well,maybe to help us out.”I answered.
“well no duh! Can we PLEASE have a hint of where the map is,Chiron?”danny said.
“well I can just tell you that this map you will find near the one that has your blood but you have never met.”
Well that sounds easy.Probably her parents,she never met them,right?
“well maybe its her parents.”I suggested.
“yeah,but she has two godly parents and right now her mom isn’t in the underworld. Meaning that you MAY have to go to both underworld and Olympus to search for the map.”Chiron replied.
It looked as if Danny was about to say something but then she just started staring at her feet.
“Wait! Do you mean to tell us you don’t know where the map is?”Ely said.
“uhhh well im not aware but the gods know but they just tell me hints that I will tell you children”
Oh there is something I forgot to tell you readers out there!
I really HATE my dad.
He is always just caring about himself!I met him once and all he would say was “you’re my son and im proud of you” I mean seriously!To me that just sounds like he doesn’t care about me!
“Ok so we just go to the underworld and if my dad doesn’t have the map we go to Olympus to see if my mom has it?”Danny said.
Chiron nodded.
“Well what if none of them have the map?”

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME did i say it was AWESOME cuz it is!!!!!!!

THIS MAY JUST BE THE WEIRDEST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER DONE.ALSO,THANK YOU EVERYONE(ESPECIALLY DEZZYPOO)FOR THE NICE COMMENTS!YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!

Chiron
Chapter 11
This kids can be quite smart when it comes to important things.
“Well if none of them have the map then we will just go to alaska and hide there until we die of hunger.think guys.”Sam said.
Ok maybe not all of them.
With what Sam said Daniela went over to him and well smacked him in the back of his head.
The nymph imediatley started laughing. Well I got to admit I made a small smirk at what happened.
“you jerk!why cant you ever actually think smart!”she said.
“I think you are thinking of me the wrong way!My idea was genius!” sam replied. Then they started making this huge fight.
Now that I think of it this kids act familiar to some other demigods that really made me proud.But instead,this demigods are the complete opposite.
“uhhhh Chiron so when should we leave to search for the map?”the nymph asked while her two friends didn’t even hear her and just kept arguing.
“tomorrow morning after 6:00 am but before 8:00 am”I whispered in her ears.
“WHAT!”now this time those two heard me,even though I was whispering!
“yes,that would be the best time.it would help you finish this quest earlier.”
Or it could be the punishment for being strictly annoying.
Oh,what am I saying,those kids are contagious!
They all groaned and walked out the room toward their cabins.
“don’t forget to pack enough supplies!”I shouted towards them just in case they forget.
The two girls just made a face that was saying”no duh!”
While the boy just did something that was like saying”oh right”
I think that they are different from most demigods.
Tomorrow wont be a happy day for me.
I hope they are all how do you say it,morning people,right?

SWEET SWEET SWEET!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA sam got hite in the back of the head!!!!

danny-haha since the next chapter isnt till tomorrow i guess this is something fun to waste comments
sam-comments?
ely-what comments?
*danny smacks sam,again*
danny-well how do i explain this.
percy-this i guess is a comment.
everyone-ahhhh when did you get here.
percy-i come from another forum you made but totally forgot about.
everyone-....
gwen-chicken!
danny-another idiot*walks out the door*
ely-what door?
everyone-....

HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAHAAAAAAAA

Sam
Chapter 12
“wakey wakey!”I kept saying and saying.
Its 7 am and danny wont wake up.Me and Ely keep trying to wake her up!
We have tried everything!This is so annoying!
“Do you want us to take your bags?You did pack right?”Ely asked.
She turned in her sleep.Ill take that as a yes since she turned right and I looked in that direction and saw a backpack with a black rose.Which is a very likely style for a daughter of Persephone and Hades.
I walked over to the back pack and opened it.
All I could say was” wow”.
“what’s wrong?” Ely asked.
She walked over to the back pack and said the same thing I did”wow”
Inside the pack was a bunch of containers full of pasta and a box of frozen pizza,her sword was the only normal thing I could find.
“uhhhh well ill take the bag.”ely suggested.
I nodded and turned to face danny.
She was still asleep.When ely walked out the door I was getting bored so I started doing it again.
“wakey,wakey”this time she woke up.
She shot up straight from her bed and had her eyes staring straight at mine.
When I saw into those eyes I saw the eyes of a beast.
I did the smartest thing I could think of.
“mommy!mommy!there is a monster in the room!a monster!”
I ran out still screaming.
Im serious I belive that a monster was in that room and I do belive it was danny! If you were me you would do the same thing!



I have a theory that chickens will take over the world!

Sam ran out screaming hahahahahahahahaha i LOVED it post soon :)

Daniela
Chapter 13
What is wrong with sam?
He just went running out my cabin lke he saw a monster.
Well I slept good. I actually had a dreamless night like I pretty much always have. So I got ready and went outside. But where is my backpack I had my pasta in that!
When I walked outside I saw ely holding it and sam next to her looking at me with terrified eyes. I couldn’t help giving a small grin.
Ely came over to me.
“what are you Italian?”she asked.
“no Cuban.why do you ask?”I replied.
“uhhh nothing”she shoved my pack into my hands and I slung it over my shoulders carefully though so I wont damage anything.
“so when do we leave?”I spoke.
With that Chiron came towards us.
“right about now…”with those words I knew it was my cue. By that I mean take us to the underworld.I learned a trick two years ago and decided I should use it.
It felt like going into quicksand but with black sand that symbolizes death.
We were all going into that underworld,well everyone but Chiron of course.
We were going deeper and deeper and…
Well it was a tough landing but the good part we were magically in my dad’s castle or whatever you would like to call it. The bad part we were surrounded by hellhounds.
Well that I didn’t find very bad but when I looked back at ely and sam they were all with terrified looks in their eyes. Well sams eyes were the most terrified.
I took a picture.
Well I had picked up a camera before getting out of my cabin actually.
“bad dogs!go away!”I yelled, and with that they stopped surrounding us and left.
Ok I guess cameras attract monsters but that picture I will not throw away.

Which came first?The chicken or the egg?

the egg no the chicken no the egg i don't know but all i know is that was a great chapter

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Sam
Chapter 14
She didn’t take a picture of me right? I mean seriously why would someone take a…well maybe because im just so handsome but-
Danny smacked me.
Wow it was like she was reading my mind or something,well that really was a good chance to smack me but…whats up with her smacking me. We have only known each other for 2 days and its like we are childhood enemies!
Isnt this great!
“You jerk…couldn’t you have made a more epic face because seriously that was awesome!”she said.
Well I guess that was a nice th-wait what kind of face did I make?
Then hades walked in.
“well hello daughter what brings you here? oh and you brought friends! Are they dead or alive”Hades asked.
Well of course im alive!
“uhhh My friend ely is alive but the stupid guy over there is dead. You can keep him.”
With that he made an awkward grin.
“um no im alive.were here for a reason which I have forgotten-“
“were here because we think you might have the map for a quest we need to go on.Do you by any chance have it?”Danny interrupted.
“well it depends on the quest-“
“Two big three shall leave
To see the big tree
That will never live
To begin a destiny of faith
While finding secrets that will never be revealed”ely replied.
We need to stop it with interrupting everyone in a middle of a sentence.
“ahh that ques”
“so you know about it?do you have the map?can you tell us what is going on?”I said.
He looked at me angrily.
“im sorry I don’t have the map or can tell you anything but if you die I may tell you-”
“he is dead!”danny and ely said pointing at me.
Hades gave a chuckle and started walking away whispering what I think was”if he ever dies I hope its in a bloody match”
Rude!

me-well im lazy so im sorry for my long amout of-
percy-wow couldnt you have posted sooner i-
sam-cool.i get to tal-
ely-im hungry when-
me-what is it with-
clarrise-*starts giving us an evil stare*
everyone else-*walks away*

I kind of liked it but-

Ely
Chapter 15
“NOOOOOOO!”I screamed.
“great just great!”danny muttered.
After that we poofed up in Olympus. I don’t know how but we just did.
“MOOOOM!” dang! Danny sure can scream! I was right next to her and now I think I lost my hearing in my right ear.
“WHAAAAAT!” another scream coming from the left side. Great, now I think im completely death. Soon I will be dead!
Well I guess that was Persephone because she came to where we were…which I think is in front of the elevator.
“mommy…”danny made some puppy dog eyes”do you by any chance have a map?”
“no”she replied.
“oh well than your no use!”
“hey! What is this map question all about any ways?”
I repeated the prophecy,that I have been remembering ever since I heard it.
Persephones’ face went blank.
“uhh…ummm….uhhh”well that wasn’t a ummm…uhhhh good thing to say!
“I think we need to talk deary” she said.
“about what?”
Persephone grabbed Danny’s shoulder and started walking away. Danny made a signal which I guess meant”brb”
I turned around and for the first time since we got here I noticed sam.
“I never got a chance to talk in this chapter till now!”
I stared.

am i startingto forget this?
Sam-maybe!

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oooo lala beautiful
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