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Okay What do you Guys think of this Idea?

Okay I've already started to write it but I'm wondering if I should keep going?

The Story's called Millions Of Miles Apart and it's about a girl named Sunflower who has Albinism and she's never been loved by anyone but one day a strange voice appears out of no where...Here's the first chapter!

Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there you have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same heart strings as you and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep you apart from one another...But what if my one true love isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him or her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first day of spring, March 20, 1998. And was born and raised in Maine for all my life so far. I just turned 13. I was born with albinism. Albinism Congenital disorder characterized by the complete or partial absence of pigment in the skin, hair and eyes due to absence or defect of an enzyme involved in the production of melanin. At less that’s what my doctor says. In other words I’m albino. I have white skin, white hair and red eye’s. But the sad thing is that I love the sun which isn’t good for me. That day in the delivery room was the happiest day my mother’s life she told me. She said that she was over joy when she saw my for the first time. She said that she didn’t care that I had albinism she loved me who I was. She loved that I was different and unique white skin in all. But my father on the other hand didn’t like that I was different. He thought I would be trouble. Something that would just empty out his wallet with all the mediation and doctors and everything else because of my disorder. My mother was the only one how thought I was truly beautiful...Until she was taken away from me...


Okay What do you Guys think of this Idea?
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Just letting you know I did post it!
malmcd posted over a year ago
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alicia386 said:
At first I was wondering where the story was going but that last sentence had me hook. I do believe that this could be fantastical. I would read it of you decide to post it.
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zaynluver687 said:
Luv it totally hooked :)
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SweetHoneyBunny said:
It's a good idea, unique and interesting. I would definitely read it.
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Okay then I'm going to Post it! ^^
malmcd posted over a year ago
hgfan5602 said:
I love it it sounds awesome and epic.
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