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So i was thinking about writing a story.
It's about a boy, who has no one except a 12 year old sister there for him, but he misses his ex-gf and brother, who was his best friend his whole life. His life is kinda f*cked up, he's on drugs, alcohol, stealing and all that stuff. Until he meets a girl, who changes his life. He finally sees things the way they used to be, happy, bright.
But then a tragic fire comes, threatening to swallow the girl into the flames. The boy must risk his life to save her. Will he do it? Will he succeed?
And it goes on, but i would tell you the story, so there wouldn't be any point in reading it :)
So, the names and stuff:
Simon Cogsworth -
the main character
Jacob Cogsworth -
Simon's brother - died (you would find the reason in the story)
Adele Cogsworth -
Simon's baby sister, 12yrs old, tries to stop Simon from screwing up his life.
Kally,Charles Cogsworth -
Simon's parents (died in a car accident caused by Charles, who was drunk)
Lily Purnell -
the girl who helps Simon get his life back on tracks.
Henry Purnell -
Lily's brother
Alexis Atkinson -
Simon's ex-girlfriend, killed by a drunk driver (you probably already have a clue who it is... )
... so, what do you think? Should i write it?
P.S. Sorry, if i have any mistakes, my home language isn't English... :)
It's about a boy, who has no one except a 12 year old sister there for him, but he misses his ex-gf and brother, who was his best friend his whole life. His life is kinda f*cked up, he's on drugs, alcohol, stealing and all that stuff. Until he meets a girl, who changes his life. He finally sees things the way they used to be, happy, bright.
But then a tragic fire comes, threatening to swallow the girl into the flames. The boy must risk his life to save her. Will he do it? Will he succeed?
And it goes on, but i would tell you the story, so there wouldn't be any point in reading it :)
So, the names and stuff:
Simon Cogsworth -
the main character
Jacob Cogsworth -
Simon's brother - died (you would find the reason in the story)
Adele Cogsworth -
Simon's baby sister, 12yrs old, tries to stop Simon from screwing up his life.
Kally,Charles Cogsworth -
Simon's parents (died in a car accident caused by Charles, who was drunk)
Lily Purnell -
the girl who helps Simon get his life back on tracks.
Henry Purnell -
Lily's brother
Alexis Atkinson -
Simon's ex-girlfriend, killed by a drunk driver (you probably already have a clue who it is... )
... so, what do you think? Should i write it?
P.S. Sorry, if i have any mistakes, my home language isn't English... :)
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