Would you read this ?

okay so im writting a new story..
its about a 16 year old guy named seth . its summer vacation and his mothers old friend wants them to come down to visit for the summer.. so him and his mom go down to visit her farm and it turns out she has a daughter that she didn't tell them about.
her name is ethel and she is 15.
so seth and ethel become friends but seth notices really weird things about ethel. the first few nights she doesn't come down to eat, she just lies in her bed with a cloth hiding her eyes. sometimes she her eyes turn a bloody red color (shes not a vampire!), and she screams late at night... Barbra (ethels mom) and his mom leave for 3 days to visit another friend that lives close by ..and barbra told seth not to bother ethel when she is in her room. seth agree's but the first night he walk into her room without kocking or anything and see's her face down on the bed. he goes over and says her name about 3 times . he starts to get freaked out by her not moving so he slightly pushes her.
she flips over and her eyes are a never ending tunnel of black with tears streaming down her face.............................

i don't wanna give her secret away so just leave me an answer
would you read my story??