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I finally did it, got a FanFiction.com account. Any advice?

here's the link to my profile: link

I think I want to do my first story on Peter Pan. I'll give you my idea synopsis. Tell me what you think, please and thank you!

For twelve generations, the descendants of Wendy Moira Angela Darlng, in the maternal line, have had very similar lives. Only their adventures with Peter Pan were unique. They were wistfull, immaginitive young ladies with two younger brothers, a stiff businessman as a father, and a mother witha winkle in her eye, reflecting some secret, wonderfull happeing from her past. Before their fourteenth birthday, Peter Pan would literally sweep them off their feet and take them to Neverland. Each one would soon realize they had to go back to the real world and grow up, and have their young hearts broken, for each and every one of them fell in love with Peter. Still, they learned a powerfull leason that they carried with them for the rest of their lives.
It wasn't untill the 13th generation that this tradition faltered. The begging of her life went according to this plan, but when she went to Neveland, she fell in deeper love with Peter than any one before her. Leaving Peter after her adventure devestated her, and she shut herself off from any compasion for the rest of her life, in fear of being hurt again. She married for monetary security, not for love or even atraction. The signs of this Peter business repeating itself started to creep up on the 13th succesor of Wendy soon after this. She had a daughter, Elizabeth, and two sons, Maxwell and Howard. She decided that she must protect Elizabeth from Peter Pan. She would do this by making sure she grew up as quickly as possible, and all immagination and wishy washy ideas were pounded out of her young mind as soon as possible. She homeschooled Elizabeth, teaching her math and science, and sensoring any fictional or artsy content from her learning. She taught her that trust is the sole thing that can come out of a re
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dammit, half of this got cut off and I can't get it back!
QueenVictoria73 posted over a year ago
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i've gotta go, but i'll retype the rest of it on a comment tomorrow
QueenVictoria73 posted over a year ago
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This time, Peter has to take a girl with no ideas of imagination, adventure, and fun to Neverland. He also has to battle her mother's attempts to sabatoge him. Elizabeth's life is about to take one of the most drastic turns in history.
QueenVictoria73 posted over a year ago
 QueenVictoria73 posted over a year ago
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Annacrombie said:
congrats on getting a fanfiction account i got one today

also your idea sounds realy good
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