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Would u read this??

Ok so my story is about a guy named drew sparks who discovers he's a time travler and a magic worker a very dangerous combination becouse it gives him the ability to effect time and bring non-travlers through time. The last time this happened 500 years ago the dark one was created the 3 brothers were able to trap him but only until the next decendent came in to his powers. The dark one is unravling time and drew needs to stop him but how can he when he could change time so easily in the first book he's given the chance to kill hitler while he's still a kid will he do it? So mainly that's the plot wat do u think I don't care if u put negative critisisiam just speak ur mind
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bookworm12345 posted over a year ago
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isn't that a bit... pendragon?
amymeymy posted over a year ago
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Well I came up with this idea before I read those books so this is purely my imagination
bookworm12345 posted over a year ago
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I came up with it after I finished the time paradox by eoin colfier that was half a year before I read pendragon
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XDRoseLuvsHP said:
Wow. I really like this idea! I really think you should go through with it!

My only one bit of advice (in general) is that you shouldn't rush it. Really take the time to develop it and write it with a good amount of detail and emotion. I don't know how old you are, but I know that a LOT of teen writers tend to rush their stories and ruin them that way. This is a truly brilliant idea. Take your time and really pull it all the way through. Good luck! I'll be sure to read it :)
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I agree! Nice idea!!
juste_123 posted over a year ago
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I've been working on it for about a year now I take a really long time Ive only written the first chapter and I've changed it 4 times
bookworm12345 posted over a year ago
chickencheese said:
It's not reall my kind of book, but I like the idea. I probably would read it, but I wouldn't necessarily go to it first.
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