would you read this? please tell me what you think

I ran all the way to the other side of the hill, tears streaming down my red cheeks as I was panting. I didn't dare look back, I didn't want to see the look on my grandmothers face when she had seen what i had done. I stopped for a moment, crouching down and feeling the need to scream out in anger. I took deep breaths, feeling sad and scared. It was mid afternoon and it was hot, boiling hot. I could feel the sweat trickling down my forehead. I had nothing to eat or drink, and nobody to help me survive. It grew darker every minute as i sat down, resting.

I think that maybe you should end it with a question, that could hint at what the character did, and that would foreshadow what the character will do after that scene.