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Does this sound good and beleiveable ?

What if you got raped at 16, and your parents wanted you to get an abortion but you felt as if that was killing a life. Would you be able to raise the child and every time you looked at it, remembering the night where you would scream for help but no one was there to help, you were helpless againest him raping you, and closing your eyes, wondering if you'll ever wake up, hoping you dont so the torture would be over, or would you send your baby up for adoption, just hoping she'll be safe and loved as much as you would love her.
 FIALMOIVLEY posted over a year ago
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snusnu13 said:
yeah, but why does the sixteen year old feel this way? Imagine telling that child who there dad is.

Kid: "Who's my dad, do you know mummy?"
16 year old: "Some guy who raped me and made me feel powerless and awful"

It would be a very interesting story to see how the sixteen year old grasps the concept though
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chickencheese said:
I think it does sound believable, so long as you include enough information about how she feels about the child itself. For example, you couldn't just say that she didn't want the child to die, you would have to explain exactly why. It sounds like a very very interesting story, and I would definately read it!
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