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I Need Your Help, Please :]

Hey there, guys! I really need some feedback on a story I'm writing for publishing. Will you help me out, please? I would appreciate it VERY much :) Here's the link: link
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 Summer_Leanne posted over a year ago
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txter32 said:
To tell the truth, I think the first chapter is really long for a chapter....maybe its just me. The whole vampire/ werewolves thing is kinda idk...how you say popular now so i don't think it will have a problem selling..i love your opening paragraph, it really hooks the readers.
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