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Can you read my story and tell me wat you think please?

It's called Charlie's Powers
 Charlieminster posted over a year ago
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Choco7 said:
great description of the main charater but in next story you should explain wat her friends
look like why they like her other than that i cant wait 4 wat going 2 happen nxt xD if u want i can try 2 make pic of her
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will do thanks :)
Charlieminster posted over a year ago
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welcome
Choco7 posted over a year ago
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charlieminster u could read my article Interesting Opening Techniques 4 your storys opening sentence and if u dont mind it be a big favor if u read one my new arcticle "my dream" and comment on it give it some ideas it will be a big help
Choco7 posted over a year ago
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