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I have writer's block with this chapter (the one below) suggestions for what happens next, I have a general idea but not a complete one.
For the first time I look up from the floor. Stella looks very worried and disturbed.
"A package was left from the abductor, in it were a video of your partner being tortured and a severed finger, the techs matched DNA from the finger to your partner's DNA."
"Oh God no. " my already cracked composure falters even more. However I try not to let it show, "the video, was there any background noise that might hint where he was at?"
"The abductor was very careful about that, however her voice does sound familiar, the techs are trying to ID her, but she's smart she keeps her face out of the light. She did mention something about being the lover of a Nicole Wallace, does that name ring any bells?"
I begin speaking without pausing "Nicole Wallace was a serial killer that taunted Goren for many years. She even killed his brother Frank two years ago, shortly afterwards she was murdered by Declan Gage, Goren's mentor. It is possible that this young woman blames my partner for Nicole's death." I clutch the back of the chair to try to keep from loosing my balance and falling to the interrogation room floor. I feel weak, that's when I realise that the last time I ate was lunch, yesterday, with Goren. That's when I finally do collapse.
I wake up several minutes later on the break room couch with Stella and Danny standing over me worried.
"Are you okay?" Stella asks.
I am about to get up and ask to see the video that the abductor left when my stomach growls loudly in protest.
"When was the last time you ate?"
"Yesterday, lunch with my partner. I'll be fine, I'll just eat a doughnut." I lie.
Apparently that's not good enough for either of them.
"C'mon, you need to eat more than that. Your partner won't benefit from you being too weak to save him." Stella groans.
Finally I comply even though I really don't want a sandwich.
When we arrive back at the precinct, Rodgers is waiting by my desk looking visibly shaken. "I found epithelials under John Ge
"A package was left from the abductor, in it were a video of your partner being tortured and a severed finger, the techs matched DNA from the finger to your partner's DNA."
"Oh God no. " my already cracked composure falters even more. However I try not to let it show, "the video, was there any background noise that might hint where he was at?"
"The abductor was very careful about that, however her voice does sound familiar, the techs are trying to ID her, but she's smart she keeps her face out of the light. She did mention something about being the lover of a Nicole Wallace, does that name ring any bells?"
I begin speaking without pausing "Nicole Wallace was a serial killer that taunted Goren for many years. She even killed his brother Frank two years ago, shortly afterwards she was murdered by Declan Gage, Goren's mentor. It is possible that this young woman blames my partner for Nicole's death." I clutch the back of the chair to try to keep from loosing my balance and falling to the interrogation room floor. I feel weak, that's when I realise that the last time I ate was lunch, yesterday, with Goren. That's when I finally do collapse.
I wake up several minutes later on the break room couch with Stella and Danny standing over me worried.
"Are you okay?" Stella asks.
I am about to get up and ask to see the video that the abductor left when my stomach growls loudly in protest.
"When was the last time you ate?"
"Yesterday, lunch with my partner. I'll be fine, I'll just eat a doughnut." I lie.
Apparently that's not good enough for either of them.
"C'mon, you need to eat more than that. Your partner won't benefit from you being too weak to save him." Stella groans.
Finally I comply even though I really don't want a sandwich.
When we arrive back at the precinct, Rodgers is waiting by my desk looking visibly shaken. "I found epithelials under John Ge
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