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I'M HAVING A WRITING CONTEST- DEADLINE IS AUGUST 21- Quick it;s coming up! Click here 4 details!

If you win- props and a BIG anounsment will be made to ALL my friends and posted on everybody's wall!!! I will even post it on an answer on Justin Beibers page- so EVERYBODY see's it.
Good Luck-
P.S The story can't be to long but at least 60 words
P.P.S Remember have fun and hurry!!
 mpepin04 posted over a year ago
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juicyjossy9 said:
SORRY IT MAY BE TOO LONG, BUT IT IS THE SHORTEST I COULD DO:

HOPE

I'm sitting alone in the warm sand of a peaceful beach, holding a magic lamp in my hands, waiting until sunset to feel the last ray of sun going to sleep in the dark starry sky, to make the very same wish. I rub the lamp and instantly, two stars blazing from nowhere collide high in the sky, blinding me. When suddenly an angel emerges from the magic sea unfurling his wings in a sigh of ecstasy, like a butterfly glowing in the sun. Soft sea music caresses his hair, his face, his body. I can't take my eyes away from such a spectacle.

A hidden power lifts me up and I walk to his direction, like being attracted by a magnet. We dance around each other, feeling free, free from fear, free from hurt, so complete in one soul, so close to heaven... We slowly stop dancing, reaching out and staring at each other. We finally drop our masks. We discover our faces. His deep green eyes strike at me like a flash of lightning, like an endless crescendo. He closes my eyes delicately with his fingers, touches my face and puts a feather-touch kiss on my nose... and on my lips. He runs his hands softly through my hair and whispers words to my ear only heaven can understand.

While transforming into peacocks in rapture, raising hands, stardust sprinkles on us. He smiles, takes my hand and we fly high in the evening sky like two creatures of God so happy to be living their dream as one. In a nameless world where money, weapons and false religions do not exist, a world where joy and harmony are ways of life, where learning is the highest aim, where love is the ultimate goal, a world where all its people are equal ...

--- Practice kindness and gratitude with everyone, including yourself, everywhere and every day, it's great for the soul! So have an awesome caring day!
Venus.a.k.a.♥jj9
2010.08.18

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no its great!
mpepin04 posted over a year ago
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Oh my gosh! That is a love story waiting to happen- it allready did!
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AliceKinsley said:
I know its a little late.....sorry...

I couldn’t take it anymore. They were fighting over me. Over me. I didn’t love Mill like I thought I had. It was just that I hadn’t seen him in so long. He made me, want him. Tears were streaming down my face like waterfalls now. Leon was a good guy, but he hadn’t even shown affection what so ever in our relationship. I wanted someone that was sweet, loved me for me, was funny, and I wanted someone that actually cared. Someone like…Arthur.
    “Neither,” I told them, surprising myself.
    “What?” They both asked me. I raised my voice.
    “I said neither,” And I began to walk away. Leon walked up behind me and grabbed my arm. I pulled away from his strong grasp. He pulled harder, and it was obvious that he wanted me to go with him. But right now, I don’t think I could’ve. I still didn’t move. Once again, he pulled my arm, and I was sent flying to the forest floor. Leon spat in my direction, kicked me in the stomach. He stomped on my hand, breaking it. Walking away, he laughed madly.

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