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Is my story too similar to another one that already exists?
It's about a girl called Lucy who discoveres with some of her friends that they can change into mermaids. They all keep this in secret.
Unfortunately, Lucy has to move to Berlin where she can't transform or meet her friends anymore. Some guys bully her at school and she gets only one good friend, Denise.
When Lucy returns to the seaside for a holiday, her friends have changed. Not all of them are interested in swimming around as mermaids anymore.
But most of them change their mind when they get invitations for a public school which turns out to be a school for mermaids, angels, demons and centaurs. Once there, Lucy is pretty surprised to meet Denise as an angel and the school bully Xenia as a demon again. Soon, she finds more friends and enemies. Her worst enemy will be Ladi à Blesse (nobody knows her real name), who seems to be after her for a reason she doesn't know.
Of course, this is only the very general plot. There will be some subplots, too.
But what do you think about it so far? Is it okay?
Unfortunately, Lucy has to move to Berlin where she can't transform or meet her friends anymore. Some guys bully her at school and she gets only one good friend, Denise.
When Lucy returns to the seaside for a holiday, her friends have changed. Not all of them are interested in swimming around as mermaids anymore.
But most of them change their mind when they get invitations for a public school which turns out to be a school for mermaids, angels, demons and centaurs. Once there, Lucy is pretty surprised to meet Denise as an angel and the school bully Xenia as a demon again. Soon, she finds more friends and enemies. Her worst enemy will be Ladi à Blesse (nobody knows her real name), who seems to be after her for a reason she doesn't know.
Of course, this is only the very general plot. There will be some subplots, too.
But what do you think about it so far? Is it okay?
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