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Safe Word

You pick my flowers

As I lay under your jealous skies

Your platinum ribbons dripping

As you rape my meadows

Your wind on my living mountains

As my branches reach your sweet apples

Your claws create red streams down my slopes

As my green garden mists

Full of love

Full of trust

Full to the brim

Make my concrete beg

Make it live with your beams

Make it crawl with your acid rain

Make it call out

Serpent

 Vixie79 posted over a year ago
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irena83 said:
Oh i really loved it,so deep,emotional. I like your style. So nice.
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Aw thanks so much. ♥
Vixie79 posted over a year ago
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I can feel the depth of your feelings clearly,trust,lust and finally betrayal. So powerful poem. I adore it! ♥
irena83 posted over a year ago
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Aw thanks!
Vixie79 posted over a year ago
para-scence said:
whoa. O_o that was COOL! AWESOME JOB!
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Thanks so much! ♥
Vixie79 posted over a year ago
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