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what do you think of my plot?? plz answerr!!

there are four main clans in Old World: the smokies, the shadows, the moons, and the suns. the clans have never gotten along with eachother. they used to all be one clan. then there was the great clan war, where they were divided. nobody won, everybody lost what they needed the most: eachother. there is now a long-accustomed hatred and in some cases that hatred has turned deadly. when a moon girl and a shadow boy fall in love, no one will ever be the same. a story of prejudice, love, supernatural, pride, seclusion, and choices we all make.
 hermione980 posted over a year ago
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rebaj2010 said:
that sounds like something i would read. its very different and just an idea, i think should name the moon girl Luna, like the luner eclipse?
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That's good because Luna is also Italian for moon!
1-2vampire posted over a year ago
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thx:)
hermione980 posted over a year ago
Wanda5 said:
That sounds great! I would love to read it, and I agree, Luna is a good name for the girl :)
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thank yaa:D
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1-2vampire said:
That sounds like something I would read, and people who like the chronicles of darkness would like this. I also agree the girl's name should be Luna, Italian for "moon" and the boy... Umbra, Latin for "shadow" but it does sound a bit like a female name so if you don't use it I understand.
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Oh, and the title? Maybe, the Clash of the Clans. but it does sound a bit cheesy
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thank youu:)
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Silverain said:
Really cool! What about the name 'Farran' for the shadow boy? It means gray. And shadows can be shades of gray. The story sounds good:)
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thx ya:)
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Gracelyn87 said:
O: i would so read that
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ruby1000 said:
That sounds like a great plot line.... you should write it :)
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earthangel said:
yeah! do keep the plot and be real nice and put it in when you finish a chapter! sounds awesome. like something i would read. how did you come up with it?
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