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Intimate Scene Help

I need help writing a intimate scene(or in this case, a sex scene)for my story. The time is in the 17-1800's, dealing with a Duke and Duchess. Any advice/help?
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^Sometimes it really helps the story. You have to take risks, or your writing will just be boring. Besides, there are many, many stories which are AMAZING which have sex scenes. It's not gross. Besides, if it is with someone you love, it's beautiful.
XDRoseLuvsHP posted over a year ago
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Oh, that comment was supposed to be to mpepin04. It got moved to the top for some reason... sorry about that...
XDRoseLuvsHP posted over a year ago
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Then put it all together.
ellie_bellie135 posted over a year ago
 Enchantedfan posted over a year ago
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ellie_bellie135 said:
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posted over a year ago 
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Thanks. =)
Enchantedfan posted over a year ago
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Now I'm stuck. I don't know weather to start with him kissing her or her kissing him, like "He lightly touched my lips as..." or " As I lightly touched his lips as..."
Enchantedfan posted over a year ago
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*Forget the extra "as" at the end
Enchantedfan posted over a year ago
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