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"I love you" He said.
"I love you...too. I said.
I was starring into his adoring
light blue eyes.
Mark was beautiful.
He was a caring, smart, brave
guy. And that's why I love him.
He bent down to slowly touch my lips.
But he paused. "What"? I asked.
"I'm not sure if I should..."
I leaned up and kissed him.
The feel of his soft gentle lips.
I remember not wanting to let go.. but
he forced me back. He looked down
and said "you should get home...
your mom's problebly worried".
"O..okay". I whispered. We
headed back to his car.Holding hands and such.
"Bye" He whispered..."I love you".
"I love you, too."
"Text me... okay".
"Okay".
And then he left. Letting me just stand
in the front porch.
Tears building in my eyes as I walked
into the abandoned house.
"My mom's not even here". I said.
I was pissed off.
I ran to my room, crying.
All I remember was crying and crying
then it went blank.
"I love you...too. I said.
I was starring into his adoring
light blue eyes.
Mark was beautiful.
He was a caring, smart, brave
guy. And that's why I love him.
He bent down to slowly touch my lips.
But he paused. "What"? I asked.
"I'm not sure if I should..."
I leaned up and kissed him.
The feel of his soft gentle lips.
I remember not wanting to let go.. but
he forced me back. He looked down
and said "you should get home...
your mom's problebly worried".
"O..okay". I whispered. We
headed back to his car.Holding hands and such.
"Bye" He whispered..."I love you".
"I love you, too."
"Text me... okay".
"Okay".
And then he left. Letting me just stand
in the front porch.
Tears building in my eyes as I walked
into the abandoned house.
"My mom's not even here". I said.
I was pissed off.
I ran to my room, crying.
All I remember was crying and crying
then it went blank.
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