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hey, im really not sure about my writing, so i was hoping you could help me, i really need your opinion!

I need you to tell me weather you like my writing or not, so could you please please go onto fanfiction.com and search me and read my stories and please tell me what you think. You can look me up as s-jb123

thanks people :) i really need your help on this.
 s-jb123 posted over a year ago
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bri-marie said:
I will :) But be forewarned: I tend to be blunt with my critiques.

EDIT: Alright, I reviewed two (or three) on FF.net, but for the last couple I was pretty much going to say the same things. But, just for emphasis, I'm going to say something here as well: everything does not need to be in bold! It's actually hard for a lot of readers to read. Also, descriptions, descriptions, descriptions!
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yes you do. That's how you hurt my feelings!\
StarWarsFan7 posted over a year ago
deathroman13 said:
I think you have a good writing style :)
but you should make your chapters longer and make some more paragraph's. it reads better that way.
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