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What should be the opening line of my book??
This is gonna be a seriously dramatic story about the life of two boys who didn't exactly get a perfect start on life. Blake's father/Dylan's step-father(Jude) is in possession of drugs, bombs, and machine guns, has phisically abused both Blake and Dylan, and killed none other than Blake and Dylan's mother. He's hardly ever home on account of he's using all the things he's in possession of on people he wants money, sex, or even nothing from. As you can probably guess, he's wanted by the police for his actions shown all across the U.S.(Of course he's not gonna stay in one state when he's wanted.) Obviously, this doesn't exactly have the perfect affect on Blake and Dylan. They were growing up hard, cold, and mean and could end up being a future Jude. But they aren't all dumb. Blake decides he's not gonna take it anymore. He's leaving and is taking Dylan with him. He takes all the food, weapons, and money they need to live for at least a week and he'll of course, steal anything else his heart desires. At this time Dylan is barely pushing five while Blake holds a solid eight, as if that's much better. As soon as they step out the door...
Soooo, asuming that's enough 411, do you think I should start the story out by describing the setting, the characters, or just straight up say what's going on?? Or any other suggestions??
P.S. Ask me if you want to something else about what I'm planning for the book.. =D
Soooo, asuming that's enough 411, do you think I should start the story out by describing the setting, the characters, or just straight up say what's going on?? Or any other suggestions??
P.S. Ask me if you want to something else about what I'm planning for the book.. =D
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