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This is just a story I'm working on, can you give me some opinions please?
In the dead of night
many fight
and withought the light
comes the fright
That poem was the foundation of so much fear in the world of Lacura. There, stories and poems and even songs hold so many messages. You may not believe it but they once thought that the ugly duckling was a prophesy, and the duckling from the story was made a god.
But enough introductions, the real story is far more interesting than that. But I had to work hard to scrape it together, the terab legion puts tight restrictions on putting stories like this out to the public. Only allowing them to be published when they've aproved there aren't too many secrets in the work.
But who are the terab legion you ask... They're barbarians, protesters, revolters and if you will, Evil hippies. Fighting day and night for what they want.
They get their name from their leader one, Jasper Terab. He started the group soon after their current Queen moved in. He didn't like the idea of a world full of goodness... After all he was used to evil, and he loved it too. His family on the other hand, were warming to the idea, well that was until he killed them all. all of the 13 members of his huge family, even his own mother. Who had always said he was a nice boy who always did as he was told. Ironically, she had also told him not to shoot at her... But you can guess how it went from there. (not well) He slowly went mad, his mental state deteriorated fast. And in his insanity, he felt the need to form a group, whose job it was to make sure that georgia wouldn't succeed on the throne. But to his surprise the whole world of Lacura were behind her... Well almost. He managed to gather a small group of 10 people, 10 twisted, mad, phsycopathic people that didn't want the world to change. And it was on that particular day, when the plan was finally coming together that the world might just change.
Georgia, the queen of Lacura, knew that people were trying to overthrow her. Afterall introducing light to Lucara
many fight
and withought the light
comes the fright
That poem was the foundation of so much fear in the world of Lacura. There, stories and poems and even songs hold so many messages. You may not believe it but they once thought that the ugly duckling was a prophesy, and the duckling from the story was made a god.
But enough introductions, the real story is far more interesting than that. But I had to work hard to scrape it together, the terab legion puts tight restrictions on putting stories like this out to the public. Only allowing them to be published when they've aproved there aren't too many secrets in the work.
But who are the terab legion you ask... They're barbarians, protesters, revolters and if you will, Evil hippies. Fighting day and night for what they want.
They get their name from their leader one, Jasper Terab. He started the group soon after their current Queen moved in. He didn't like the idea of a world full of goodness... After all he was used to evil, and he loved it too. His family on the other hand, were warming to the idea, well that was until he killed them all. all of the 13 members of his huge family, even his own mother. Who had always said he was a nice boy who always did as he was told. Ironically, she had also told him not to shoot at her... But you can guess how it went from there. (not well) He slowly went mad, his mental state deteriorated fast. And in his insanity, he felt the need to form a group, whose job it was to make sure that georgia wouldn't succeed on the throne. But to his surprise the whole world of Lacura were behind her... Well almost. He managed to gather a small group of 10 people, 10 twisted, mad, phsycopathic people that didn't want the world to change. And it was on that particular day, when the plan was finally coming together that the world might just change.
Georgia, the queen of Lacura, knew that people were trying to overthrow her. Afterall introducing light to Lucara
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