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Would you read a story like this?

I desperatly want to write a story, I like fantasy/children books mostly just because they are more entertaining and that is what I am going for in this story, please truthfully tell me what you think and if I should add more.

There is this girl named Aquata. She is about 18-20 and still lives with her parents. There are a lot of scenes where she is day dreaming or just plain dreaming. In her dreams she is a princess that has a beautiful world she owns. She has a bad day one day and so she just starts driving, not knowing where she will end up, but hopes it will lead her to a new future. She ends up finding her dream world at the end.

This could possibly be a series if I can think of more ideas! Thanks for your support! Also... I need to figure out a title??? What do ya'll think?
 spongesrule posted over a year ago
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Insight357 said:
It sounds great, but I don't see where the problem in the story is...You should spend a little more time coming up with a problem so it will be more interesting.
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I was acctually thinking of the same thing! Thank you for your support!
spongesrule posted over a year ago
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i agree. Might help doing a brainstorm a large piece of paper and go from there! Good luck with your story!
Faith-Rulz posted over a year ago
RiderOfTempest said:
I totally would, but you gotta remember to keep the readers on their toes...throw some obsticles in there too...like in her dream world she could have...evil, trying to take over or something like that... :]
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That is a wonderful idea! Thank you!
spongesrule posted over a year ago
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