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tell me if you would read this. (“Brandon!” I call. “Just follow my voice love.” he says sweetly. My love I miss his light brown hair and slightly tan skin. “I’ve finally found you!” I say happily. “Now my love…” he kissed me I missed him so much, then something sharp cut my neck. Then I woke with a start “who in the world’s Brandon?” I ask myself. I sat up on my bed looked at my clock it was 4:37 ugh three hours till school. I took a warm shower dried my hair. That left me with two hours till school. Finally sleep found me again. “Kura! Find a man named Charlie well this would be his grand son really but anyway oops you have to wake up bye.” a girl with jet black hair and pale skin said. “Wake up Kura and this time eat before you go to school.” my foster mom Lacey said.) tell me if you want me to post it.
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Yeah I would resdi it but it has lots of punctuation mistakes...
huddysmacked posted over a year ago
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I meant read*
huddysmacked posted over a year ago
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^^ LOL. I would read it if you corrected your grammar. I can help you with that if you'd like me to.
j1edwardcullen7 posted over a year ago
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please help me
Thalia_huntress posted over a year ago
 Thalia_huntress posted over a year ago
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summerfrog said:
absolutely post it! your story sounds great :-)
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posted over a year ago 
Nayeli53 said:
i love it!!! what happens next?
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innerstrength said:
It sounds... interesting... in a good way i think...the way it was presented got me cofused though...
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