How would you like my first ever story ?

Do you believe every problem has a solution, every magic has a mystery in it and everything happens for a reason.
Let's see what happens here.

Vecynio-heaven on the earth, with beautiful colored flowers, talking animals, singing birds, lakes and rivers that never dry, people with happy face and everything that's referred as "treasure".

Cayson, the prince of vecynio, the most handsome man in the whole world was getting trained from his guru , with a bow and an arrow in his hand. Wow, he never misses a single target , let it be flying, floating, jumping. But he never bows his head to anyone, not even to God.

He had all the qualities to be the king and the people were happy about him. But his father knows he could not be the king unless he knows what respect is and learns to bow his head.
One fine day, Cayson was told by his father, the king of vecynio, to dress like a normal person and travel to the place behind the forest. Without asking for the reason, the prince accepted the King's order.
Tanem, the dwarf, the best friend of the prince wanted to accompany him in this journey but since the King refused, Tanem bid a sad goodbye to Cayson with tears in his eyes. They were never apart since they were born.
Cayson started his journey, dressed like a normal person , with a backpack and Marin,his horse.
Days & nights passed and he was getting to eat the fruits on the trees & sleep under the tree. Marin felt bad to see his prince living this life but he knows he should not discourage him and did not show off.
Ten days passed and Cayson happened to see a castle surrounded by pinkish lake with green crow-like birds flying over it.
He went near the garden of the castle and was stopped by looking at the people dancing, singing happy.
Then noticed the beautiful princess, with skin as white as snow,lips as red as a rose and eyes as black as midnight. He was totally stunned by her beauty and was starring at her without noticing the people there vanished after thei