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Please help me describe my house in high quality works....white 4 bedroom house , white fence , the smell of backed goods, laughing children running in the yard ..beautiful flower. Just a wonderful,loving home.

 jessiesmith2 posted over a year ago
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peacebaby7 said:
3rd Person:

The first thing you notice is the sweet, crisp smell of baked goods wafting from the kitchen and the sound precious of laughter from the children playing in the yard surrounded by a white picket fence. The warmth of the sun beaming off of the white exterior offers a hearty welcoming and draws you closer like a butterfly to the sweet fragrance of a daffodil. Love is the very essence of the home, seeping from every corner, every crevice, and every open window and embraces your very soul. Instantly, you experience peace and the prosperity of amore.

1st Person:

The first thing I always notice is the sweet, crisp smell of baked goods wafting from the kitchen and the sound of precious laughter from the children playing in the yard surrounded by a white picket fence. The warmth of the sun beaming off of the white exterior offers a hearty welcoming and draws me closer like a butterfly to the sweet fragrance of a daffodil. Love is the very essence of the home, seeping from every corner, every crevice, and every open window and embraces my very soul. Instantly, I experienced peace and the prosperity of amore.

How is that?
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great ..thanks so much
jessiesmith2 posted over a year ago
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do u have an idea how i can take that info and some how tell the reader thats my favorite place
jessiesmith2 posted over a year ago
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this is for my honors class ..has to be very descriptive
jessiesmith2 posted over a year ago
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Why don't you try writing it yourself?
peacebaby7 posted over a year ago
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