Okay, I know I have been writing a lot of Edgar Rice Burroughs related stories and concepts, but in Spring and Summer, I get oddly obsessed with Tarzan and hippies, and I don't know why. Lol! Anyway, I'm making a story. very Tarzan related, but more modern and updated. WARNING AND NOTICE: I AM NOT PLAGERISING EDGAR RICE BURROUGHS!!! This is my own version of what he wrote, except for a few changes: 1) The jungle man's name will not be Tarzan 2) The jungle will not have any villages or villagers nearby. I want it to seem like he's never seen an actual person before. 3) The female character won't have the name Jane. Also, her character will be a goth/hippie rebellious type, not a proper English red haired girl from the 18-1900's (like in the Disney film) or a blond girl from the 18-1900's. This will be my version, and I will put up poles, so you guys can vote and help me out on this story! It's going to be shorter than Darkness Within Me, but longer than the other one I'm working on, so thanks for helping and I hope you like the story that I work on soon. May you all have a fantastic Friday and are very excited for Easter next weekend! :)!
The words made my breath fall short in my throat, a small whimpering sound went up through my chest. I slowly rose my watch, exactly the time I was to be doomed. The part of the wall carrying the dread words burst open and rats started to crawl in, immediatly gnawing at my flesh, I tried to back away, but the part i had opened up suddenly closes and i was trapped in darkness, I was trapped, I was trapped with no hope off escape and a thousand beady eyes crawling all over my body, wrigglin down my chest and making their way towards my heart. I spun and rolled around as much as I could in the small space, but the rats were persistent, and my blood trickeld all around me, forming in a pool under me. After a while a finally gave up. For all I had done i was payed with my own dead, locked in a narrow passage with rats all around me, the last living things i would ever interact with. I began to sob softly and my final breath flew from my body, I was a limp, lifeless corpse.....
Another poem by me. This one came out kinda lame,but I'll let the rating be the judge (assuming there will be any).
That Girl
Have you seen that girl,
That goes around here and there?
Nobody knows where she’s going,
Is she even going somewhere?
Pretty face, pretty hair,
Nobody knows her name,
She seems sad, what a coincidence,
I’ve been feeling the same.
She seems lost,
Doesn’t even know where she’s from,
I’m a nice guy so I invite her,
To stay in my home.
She seats in the couch,
My, is she pretty?
I wonder what I can say,
To comfort that girl , so dreamy.
Sarah,
She tells me it’s her name,
She feels sad,
Funny,
Because I’ve been feeling the same
That Girl
Have you seen that girl,
That goes around here and there?
Nobody knows where she’s going,
Is she even going somewhere?
Pretty face, pretty hair,
Nobody knows her name,
She seems sad, what a coincidence,
I’ve been feeling the same.
She seems lost,
Doesn’t even know where she’s from,
I’m a nice guy so I invite her,
To stay in my home.
She seats in the couch,
My, is she pretty?
I wonder what I can say,
To comfort that girl , so dreamy.
Sarah,
She tells me it’s her name,
She feels sad,
Funny,
Because I’ve been feeling the same