Rain pour hard outside the sound made me want to stay in bed hmmm I turn to my side and moan
“mom,daaaaaad”my eye start to water my body gave a little shake as if I was cold when I was pretty sweaty with my four blankets on me
“what ?”dad yelled mom turned on the light she rushed to put her hand on my cheek
“whats wrong?"her tone was tired I almost felt bad for waking her up but
“mom I feel sick”my voice sounded just right weak and paimed
“hmmm”after an hour of nonstop questions and acting on my part mom let me in peace
“we`ll be at work while jr. is going to be at school and after school program so you'll be here alone intil 8pm ok Eve?”
“got it"i mumbble
Once they left I jumped out of bed I fixed my room I looked outside my window the rain looked pretty maybe cuz our neibor had a nice garden.I ran to the kichen to get some food when I felt the floor shake but everything was in its place then I felt it again but on my but I yelp and slaped whatever was there wich turned out to be my phone
I checked my phone when I saw it was briana I anwserd
“sup briana hows school?”i ask inocently
“oh save it I faked sick but like I had to parents didnt even notice not even my brother and sister”she sighed I rattled my brain to figure out how to make this work becuase briana was donw in the dump and this wasnt knew but she had her reasons
“hey want me to go kick it at ur place I mean I played sick cuz of the weather and im bored out of my mind here”i shove a spoon full of macnchesse in my mouth waiting for her to reply
“yeah”she said after a while“but you sure its rainimg you could get sick”
“i faked sick so if I get sick iy realy wount count on my mom geting mad about that ill be their as fast as I can hmm hey dad made macnchesse and this time tne kichen isnt covered in it miriclers do
happen”
“ha i remember ur hair smelled like cheese for a week how the hell did he make chesse explosed?”
“he was to lazy that moring to do it rigjt so he made it in the micoro well thats wat he said so il see you later”
“see u later then eve”
After I ate of the pan I got the house clean not that it needed it the house was small compated to the rest of the houses here in(the rich part of l.a) I still wonder how the family did it coming from mexico when I was just 4 and now they were on world they work non stop when I was little I hardly ever saw themso you can say I was pretty loud when I got
every chance to see them and now I see how they try not to do that with bro jr man is he a hand full but nothing I can take.
I froze in place a feeling of being wached washed unto my body but thats silly I got that a lot buti like to think they were angels when I was younger but this was just to creepy good thing I
know self defense once I finish I go to my room closeing the door and take deep breath.
My washed out jeans neon yellow shirt gray warm jacket convers with my favorite bennie I knew briana would say I have no type of clothes im not good at picking favorites exep my bennie that she gave me on my birthday
“mom,daaaaaad”my eye start to water my body gave a little shake as if I was cold when I was pretty sweaty with my four blankets on me
“what ?”dad yelled mom turned on the light she rushed to put her hand on my cheek
“whats wrong?"her tone was tired I almost felt bad for waking her up but
“mom I feel sick”my voice sounded just right weak and paimed
“hmmm”after an hour of nonstop questions and acting on my part mom let me in peace
“we`ll be at work while jr. is going to be at school and after school program so you'll be here alone intil 8pm ok Eve?”
“got it"i mumbble
Once they left I jumped out of bed I fixed my room I looked outside my window the rain looked pretty maybe cuz our neibor had a nice garden.I ran to the kichen to get some food when I felt the floor shake but everything was in its place then I felt it again but on my but I yelp and slaped whatever was there wich turned out to be my phone
I checked my phone when I saw it was briana I anwserd
“sup briana hows school?”i ask inocently
“oh save it I faked sick but like I had to parents didnt even notice not even my brother and sister”she sighed I rattled my brain to figure out how to make this work becuase briana was donw in the dump and this wasnt knew but she had her reasons
“hey want me to go kick it at ur place I mean I played sick cuz of the weather and im bored out of my mind here”i shove a spoon full of macnchesse in my mouth waiting for her to reply
“yeah”she said after a while“but you sure its rainimg you could get sick”
“i faked sick so if I get sick iy realy wount count on my mom geting mad about that ill be their as fast as I can hmm hey dad made macnchesse and this time tne kichen isnt covered in it miriclers do
happen”
“ha i remember ur hair smelled like cheese for a week how the hell did he make chesse explosed?”
“he was to lazy that moring to do it rigjt so he made it in the micoro well thats wat he said so il see you later”
“see u later then eve”
After I ate of the pan I got the house clean not that it needed it the house was small compated to the rest of the houses here in(the rich part of l.a) I still wonder how the family did it coming from mexico when I was just 4 and now they were on world they work non stop when I was little I hardly ever saw themso you can say I was pretty loud when I got
every chance to see them and now I see how they try not to do that with bro jr man is he a hand full but nothing I can take.
I froze in place a feeling of being wached washed unto my body but thats silly I got that a lot buti like to think they were angels when I was younger but this was just to creepy good thing I
know self defense once I finish I go to my room closeing the door and take deep breath.
My washed out jeans neon yellow shirt gray warm jacket convers with my favorite bennie I knew briana would say I have no type of clothes im not good at picking favorites exep my bennie that she gave me on my birthday
what a stupid! love! love! love! "i love love" "everybody needs to be a lover" "true love" all those stupid words! "bla bla bla"
love is a legend, there's nothing u can call it "love" , you can't even define it. you know why? because it isn't there! that's why you can't say i am in love and say the same word after two years or two days.
you see, if it worked with your lover, you 'll say you loved each other, and if it didn't work, you'll say it wasn't love!!!
you are all stupid, lovers!
you aren't even "lovers"
because "lovers" is a word from "love" and love's a legend.
when i heard this once when i was young, i didn't believe it.
but know i believe it's the truth, and there's nothing else truth.
you may not believe me now, but you will, in few years in your life.
love is a legend.
love is a legend, there's nothing u can call it "love" , you can't even define it. you know why? because it isn't there! that's why you can't say i am in love and say the same word after two years or two days.
you see, if it worked with your lover, you 'll say you loved each other, and if it didn't work, you'll say it wasn't love!!!
you are all stupid, lovers!
you aren't even "lovers"
because "lovers" is a word from "love" and love's a legend.
when i heard this once when i was young, i didn't believe it.
but know i believe it's the truth, and there's nothing else truth.
you may not believe me now, but you will, in few years in your life.
love is a legend.
Prologue Look at the world, yeah go on and look at it. Now tell me, What do you see? Home? Life? Secrets? Death? Anything? Well most people always see it differently. But they never see what’s right in front of them.
When you look at the world you always see the small things. You never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised by ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… or never will.
And I know we shouldn’t be telling you, but you ought to know.
So look at the world, that’s right look at it. Because it’s going to change forever…
When you look at the world you always see the small things. You never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised by ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… or never will.
And I know we shouldn’t be telling you, but you ought to know.
So look at the world, that’s right look at it. Because it’s going to change forever…
Okay this fits to be article worthy. I have this budding idea for a story about a girl named Skye(real named skylar) who discovers that she and her two friends are Sirens ( a different kind than you think). They all have ibdividual powers like Skye can use other peoples power, Hazelle and Gabriel,s powers are conjuring fire and Hazelle can shapeshift objects. Their parents were friends and there dads, and hazelle and gabriel have one parent while skye has none, she lives with her aunt and she has this lost sister who thinks she is a Siren but is their kinds' enemy. Meanwhile Hazelle and Gabriel are dating but skye and him are close because their moms were friends and wjen her parents died she lived with them for a while as kids. So eventually they like each other. This story is confusing and jeeds work but its what i have. Tell me should i tweek it or leave it alone. Also give me insight into what to do to fix it. Thanks.