It was a leaf-fall day and Dovewing padded out of the camp with Ivypool, Lionblaze, Cinderheart & Toadstep... She as going on a hunting patrol.
The dark forest battle had just finished and the cats were trying to get over the heart break of Hollyleaf, Ferncloud & Firestar. It was hard especially for Sandstorm, Leafpool and Squirrelflight..
Because Sandstorm was Firestar's mate and his two children werre Leafpool and Squirrelflight.
So it was mainly hard for them and Leafpool had also lost her daughter, so two deaths in one day. Ivypool had killed Hawkfrost and Tigerstar died because of Firestar.
Ivypool wanted to be with Toadstep all along, it seems weird because they are practially cousins but it isn't, it's true! They are true love. Cinderheart is expecting kits soon and Lionblaze keeps pushing her to go into the nursery but Cinderheart refuses.
Dovewing turned around. "Cinderheart & Lionblaze go hunt over at the WindClan border and remark the markers while your there.
Ivypool & Toadstep go to the Abandoned Twoleg Nest and around there and check for food and catmint. I'll go to the ShadowClan border." Dovewing meowed to her clanmates.
Ivypool & Toadstep nodded and meowed to each other as they headed into the undergrowth. Lionblaze & Cinderheart were quiet and in a low hunting crouch as they went away toward the WindClan border.
Dovewing sighed - I wish that I could just be with Bumblestripe buts it soooo hard I still have feelings for Tigerheart. He probably never wants to see me again so why should I even go and see if he's there? Well I need to see if he wants to be with me at all. - Dovewing wondered.
She stepped over the last few trees to step into the clearing where Tigerheart and her use to play with each otehr at night. He probably never wanted to see her again after she took him down. But she didn't care she had to see him. She heard a patrol coming and Tigerheart leaped out of a bush... "Dovewing? What are you doing here?" He asked.
"Tigerheart, cover up my scent quickly I'll hid in the bush, call me when they are gone! Please!" Dovewing begged, her chest heaving seeing Tigerheart again.
"Okay, but this better be important." Tigerheart meowed almost a growl.
Dovewing leaped into a bush and peeked out of the leaves to look at Tigerheart covering her scent. Dovewing grinned at the sight and started to purr, Tigerheart shot the bush where she was hiding and look saying - QUIET! - Dovewing stopped her purring as the ShadowClan patrol appeared. It consisted of:
Pinenose, Ratscar, Rowanclaw, Toadfoot, Owlclaw & Dawnpelt.
Dovewing kept in a hiss of horror to see the cat that accused Jayfeather of killing Flametail when he has drowned.
"Hello, Tigerheart." Toadfoot meowed.
"Hello, just saw a ThunderClan patrol they were just walking past and I was watching from the bush. They didn't cross the border just rescented their markers." Tigerherat lied, growling.
"Okay, we we'll leave you to remark the markers, okay? Come back to the camp soon, Blackstar is going to go to StarClan soon. You know his greencough?" Pinenose meowed, sobbing.
Dovewing shrank back guiltily and ruffled a leaf.
"Is that-," Rowanclaw began
"What? Oh! There goes a vole!" Tigerheart lied.
"Oh... Okay." Rowanclaw purred.
"Come on, bye Tigerheart." Pinenose hissed.
"Bye, Pinenose." Tigerheart sniggered.
The patrol started to be pad away and Rowanclaw kept looking back at the bush. Tigerheart turned around and pretended to remark the markers as they disappeared into the pine-forest.
"Dovewing!" He called, enthusiastically.
"Tigerheart! Oh, you did great!" Dovewing meowed, admiration lit in her beautiful pearcing blue eyes.
"Thanks, Dovewing." Tigerheart purred.
"What's that Pinenose going on about?" Dovewing asked.
"She's angry at me for always being in that bush beside the border." Tigerheart sniggered again.
"Oh, okay. Anway..." Dovewing trailed off as Tigerheart nugged her and looked at her. His amber eyes piercing her heart and soul.
"I miss you, Dovewing." Tigerheart began. "I cannot stop thinking about you and the way you said that I could move to ThunderClan and that maybe we could have kits, someday and how I turned you down and then you turned me down completely and I went off at you. I'm soooo sorry, Dovewing!" He sulked.
"Tigerheart, hush. That's why I'm here." Dovewing meowed.
"T-to see me? After what happened?" Tigerheart was surprised.
"Yes, I want another night with you. Meet me tonight at the Old Twoleg nest." Dovewing meowed.
"Okay, Dovewing. I'll be there." Tigerheart murmured and raced off only leaving dust and his familiar scent there with Dovewing.
CHAPTER 2 SOON!!
The dark forest battle had just finished and the cats were trying to get over the heart break of Hollyleaf, Ferncloud & Firestar. It was hard especially for Sandstorm, Leafpool and Squirrelflight..
Because Sandstorm was Firestar's mate and his two children werre Leafpool and Squirrelflight.
So it was mainly hard for them and Leafpool had also lost her daughter, so two deaths in one day. Ivypool had killed Hawkfrost and Tigerstar died because of Firestar.
Ivypool wanted to be with Toadstep all along, it seems weird because they are practially cousins but it isn't, it's true! They are true love. Cinderheart is expecting kits soon and Lionblaze keeps pushing her to go into the nursery but Cinderheart refuses.
Dovewing turned around. "Cinderheart & Lionblaze go hunt over at the WindClan border and remark the markers while your there.
Ivypool & Toadstep go to the Abandoned Twoleg Nest and around there and check for food and catmint. I'll go to the ShadowClan border." Dovewing meowed to her clanmates.
Ivypool & Toadstep nodded and meowed to each other as they headed into the undergrowth. Lionblaze & Cinderheart were quiet and in a low hunting crouch as they went away toward the WindClan border.
Dovewing sighed - I wish that I could just be with Bumblestripe buts it soooo hard I still have feelings for Tigerheart. He probably never wants to see me again so why should I even go and see if he's there? Well I need to see if he wants to be with me at all. - Dovewing wondered.
She stepped over the last few trees to step into the clearing where Tigerheart and her use to play with each otehr at night. He probably never wanted to see her again after she took him down. But she didn't care she had to see him. She heard a patrol coming and Tigerheart leaped out of a bush... "Dovewing? What are you doing here?" He asked.
"Tigerheart, cover up my scent quickly I'll hid in the bush, call me when they are gone! Please!" Dovewing begged, her chest heaving seeing Tigerheart again.
"Okay, but this better be important." Tigerheart meowed almost a growl.
Dovewing leaped into a bush and peeked out of the leaves to look at Tigerheart covering her scent. Dovewing grinned at the sight and started to purr, Tigerheart shot the bush where she was hiding and look saying - QUIET! - Dovewing stopped her purring as the ShadowClan patrol appeared. It consisted of:
Pinenose, Ratscar, Rowanclaw, Toadfoot, Owlclaw & Dawnpelt.
Dovewing kept in a hiss of horror to see the cat that accused Jayfeather of killing Flametail when he has drowned.
"Hello, Tigerheart." Toadfoot meowed.
"Hello, just saw a ThunderClan patrol they were just walking past and I was watching from the bush. They didn't cross the border just rescented their markers." Tigerherat lied, growling.
"Okay, we we'll leave you to remark the markers, okay? Come back to the camp soon, Blackstar is going to go to StarClan soon. You know his greencough?" Pinenose meowed, sobbing.
Dovewing shrank back guiltily and ruffled a leaf.
"Is that-," Rowanclaw began
"What? Oh! There goes a vole!" Tigerheart lied.
"Oh... Okay." Rowanclaw purred.
"Come on, bye Tigerheart." Pinenose hissed.
"Bye, Pinenose." Tigerheart sniggered.
The patrol started to be pad away and Rowanclaw kept looking back at the bush. Tigerheart turned around and pretended to remark the markers as they disappeared into the pine-forest.
"Dovewing!" He called, enthusiastically.
"Tigerheart! Oh, you did great!" Dovewing meowed, admiration lit in her beautiful pearcing blue eyes.
"Thanks, Dovewing." Tigerheart purred.
"What's that Pinenose going on about?" Dovewing asked.
"She's angry at me for always being in that bush beside the border." Tigerheart sniggered again.
"Oh, okay. Anway..." Dovewing trailed off as Tigerheart nugged her and looked at her. His amber eyes piercing her heart and soul.
"I miss you, Dovewing." Tigerheart began. "I cannot stop thinking about you and the way you said that I could move to ThunderClan and that maybe we could have kits, someday and how I turned you down and then you turned me down completely and I went off at you. I'm soooo sorry, Dovewing!" He sulked.
"Tigerheart, hush. That's why I'm here." Dovewing meowed.
"T-to see me? After what happened?" Tigerheart was surprised.
"Yes, I want another night with you. Meet me tonight at the Old Twoleg nest." Dovewing meowed.
"Okay, Dovewing. I'll be there." Tigerheart murmured and raced off only leaving dust and his familiar scent there with Dovewing.
CHAPTER 2 SOON!!
I sat alone.
No one came up to me, none asked if anything was wrong.
I sat alone.
In the corner, where everyone saw but no one noticed.
I sat alone.
I had no friends, I was not ‘cool’ enough for them.
I sat alone.
No one knew my mother had just died from cancer, no one cared.
I sat alone.
Surrounded by my thoughts, but no people. By my words, but no friends.
I sat alone.
Until a girl came and sat by me.
I sat with a girl.
She turned to me and smiled warmly, “Hello.”
I sat with a friend.
No one came up to me, none asked if anything was wrong.
I sat alone.
In the corner, where everyone saw but no one noticed.
I sat alone.
I had no friends, I was not ‘cool’ enough for them.
I sat alone.
No one knew my mother had just died from cancer, no one cared.
I sat alone.
Surrounded by my thoughts, but no people. By my words, but no friends.
I sat alone.
Until a girl came and sat by me.
I sat with a girl.
She turned to me and smiled warmly, “Hello.”
I sat with a friend.
On a foggy day ,
Following the light ,
Running far away .
There was a little car ,
Driven by two children ,
Made out of plastic and gum ,
With a fake license number .
And the car was the product
Of one’s imagination,
It was the guide through the forest
Of his life’s interpretation.
And the forest was dark
And hunted by wolves ,
Full of tears and pain
And of smiles went to vain.
And this kid was an orphan,
Slowly rushing through life ,
Searching for his mother ,
Waiting to be held tight.
He is lost and scared ,
Yet unstoppable ,
Cause all his life he’s spent
Walking through that forest.
We ain’t all lucky and rich
Or have families.
The truth is we only have ourselves,
To make our own journies.
This orphan’s an example
For those who don’t know ,
That that forest is the rode
We all have to go on .
First person writing is when the characters is speaking directly toward another person(You). You use words like "I", "Mine", "We", "Us." The character is telling the story to you themselves.
Second Person
Third person is the exact opposite. Instead of the character talking to you, the narrator is talking about the character. Your main words are "You", and "Your."
Third Person
Third person is almost similar to second person. The narrator is talking to you, but instead they use words like "He", "She", "It", and "They." Third person books often have the most detail.
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this my poem...I just wrote it randomly...Don't know if it's any good...what do you think?
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If you love him,
Tell him so.
If you love him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
Don’t hide away,
Wishing all day,
Don’t hide away,
Just come out and say.
“Yes, I love you,
I’ve told you so.
And if you love me,
Please don’t go.”
“Yes, I love you,
I’ve told you so.
And if you love me,
Please don’t go.”
“Please, please,
Please don’t go.
Please, please.
Please, please don’t go.”
So, if you love him,
Tell him so.
If you love him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
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If you love him,
Tell him so.
If you love him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
Don’t hide away,
Wishing all day,
Don’t hide away,
Just come out and say.
“Yes, I love you,
I’ve told you so.
And if you love me,
Please don’t go.”
“Yes, I love you,
I’ve told you so.
And if you love me,
Please don’t go.”
“Please, please,
Please don’t go.
Please, please.
Please, please don’t go.”
So, if you love him,
Tell him so.
If you love him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
Little raindrops shiny,silver,
Dropping silently into the river.
A girl sitting quiet,alone,
Her smile is fading,her hope is gone.
It faded really long ago,
That sounds sad,i know.
She quickly wipes away a tear,
It's her secret so no one can hear.
She secretly cries every night,
It's her fate,so she cant fight.
She touches a raindrop and goes back inside,
She is so lost,she's losing her pride.
All she asks for is a friend,
Someone to be there and understand.
So help her to make her dream come true,
There's always something you can do.
Dropping silently into the river.
A girl sitting quiet,alone,
Her smile is fading,her hope is gone.
It faded really long ago,
That sounds sad,i know.
She quickly wipes away a tear,
It's her secret so no one can hear.
She secretly cries every night,
It's her fate,so she cant fight.
She touches a raindrop and goes back inside,
She is so lost,she's losing her pride.
All she asks for is a friend,
Someone to be there and understand.
So help her to make her dream come true,
There's always something you can do.