Writing My latest story

ToEkNeE posted on Feb 21, 2009 at 07:22PM
What if.....

The one person you loved most......

The one person you cared about above everyone...

The one person you would be afraid of losing.....

Was born to kill you?


Rachel Dimon's life changed in a second the moment she looked Lucas Malico's way.

These two teens have been destined since birth but not in the way you may think.

Join these two in their fight against all odds when they try to keep themselves alive.


Chapter One- Friday, February 13
Coming Soon


Preface
Everything was silent. She looked at him for a moment with deep fury in her eyes. He looked back the same. They just stood there. Then in one brief movement, she kissed him. It lasted a few good seconds before she pulled away. Then after she looked at him in disbelief and slapped his face.
"What was that for?" He said in shock.
"You kissed me." She said gently.
His face twisted, "You kissed me?"
"I know, but you kissed back."
last edited on Feb 22, 2009 at 12:56AM

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over a year ago mtoll4 said…
OMG!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!
over a year ago karolytea said…
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wow amazing!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago twilightbandlol said…
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lolz I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!! OME, amazing! :D
over a year ago pixie09 said…
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where is it ???? D: i wanna read it !!!
over a year ago twilight_1_1 said…
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i love this.
over a year ago twilight_1_1 said…
hmmm
did you ever write anymore?
over a year ago VMars4ever said…
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Interesting preface. I'd buy it and read it once it's published. I prefer not to read things that aren't finished, especially not on the computer which has a horrid glare.
over a year ago booklover13 said…
More!!!!