Writing OK: I kinda have this idea of a normal girl. Suddenly, in her room, a bright light makes her cover her eyes. And there is a boy from the 15. century...

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Uh...NO!
Kinda...IS IT JUICY!?!?!? *...not for the moment...*
Well, the storyline seams ok but you should REALLY do something with your typos
I...wanna know more...
TOTALLY!!!
fireworks^-^ *what?*
I need more details. It seems like it's not that original.
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 martemora15 posted over a year ago
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