WTF how could u continue this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im toning down the rating so stuff your bunion and put a sock in it

I can but maybe I couldn't find my glasses for that part hmmm?

^lol!!

wow

...still u have a very sick mind

............... that was mean..........

i didnt make the first chapter im continuing it but fixing it up

w-what the fuck did i just read?!???!? Dx this....is unexplainable O_O

SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR!

ohh k

Enough you idiots who like this story! I know ermmmm in real life and I'm calling her back! You people have no idea who you're dealing with

U know ermmmm thats a werid name...... I can take anyone! Bring it! Lol

Tommorows school do I'll get her here today. To rip put your hearts and eat them!

^wtf man!!!

^oh so I just read this story and I'm like FTW!!! But yeah he is toning it down and um...good story ....

umm... ok

o ur fixing it?
ok then

yes

sry for being mean
im just glad u didnt add pics to go along w/ the story like some other poeple do
it wouldnt work for this story...

its ok and thanks

ur welcome

hi guys its been a long time since ive been here
@aqualad- first of all im really glad u offered to continue my story but im kind of upset that ur toning it down. id rather u kept the content VERY mature. whoever doesnt like it shouldnt read it , its that simple

@LORDCHAOS- i was very happy when u said u would post chapters for me but then i realized THAT U LIED TO ME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­! how could u!!!!!!
if u want to be forgiven post a chapter that would fit in with the story i started
U also lied when u said u knew me...u dont ;)


anyways thanks for continuing my story ill be back later!!!!!!!

LIVE AND LEARN

???????so r u going to post a chapter or what

Yez i am later but you can be the co writer so i guess its your turn

i have no time to be cowriter
ill just read
if i ever have time ill ask if i can post a chapter alright
u continue writing but try to stick to the original storyline plzz
if u cant i understand
BUT PLZZZZZ TRY!

sure thing

Yay! You gonna post!
I think yay....

Ill post this weekend

....................

ok i just read like 5 lines and no, you can just keep your fucked up perverted fantasy to yourself,

i am disturbed

Thank you!

@kkw1700
who r u thanking and y ?

^^^^ & ^^^ cu zthey agree this story is crap.

its not my story itssome personsssssssssssss

I dont give a crap! You're continuing it when I ended it for a reason! This story is just plain sick and disgusting and perverted and should not be on Fanpop!

Well dont read it its as simple as that gosh how hard is it to not read in the thing it says rated R that was your warning

Yeah, and that stops people from reading it. Your warning is ineffective.

Well its your fault for reading.

THIS STORY IS CRAP
IT IS BEEP!!
IT IS DISTURbing

^ It is! If you agree, click that little grey flag at the top. Report it as innapropriate.

only way its gonna get removed is if everyone removes there comments

so r u seriously continuing this story aqualad or not?

yes just dont read it.

fine ill leave u alone
ur argument makes sense

thanks someone that understands

I'm to lazy to push the buton man you do it!!!! kkw1700

Chiron

I opened up the shed door slowly and saw my dearest maiden Thalia. "Sweet pea what are you doing here?" I looked at her quizzically no one else seemed to be in there with her. "Daddy you know I like the dark come in and play." I couldn't resist ever since last summer she made me feel special. I touched her hair and she kicked me in my balls. "ahhh you brat.!" i yellled. "your to old. sorry pops." she and a few unfamiliar faces started out of the shed and then she locked me in. I heard a tiny voice from the corner of the room and Annabeth was tied up I took her knife and left her in there. I shouldve untied her but i couldnt risk her telling the entire camp so I took my knife and......