2618 views somehow!

lol i guess some people like lemons

apparently...

yazz

ok stop commenting unless your leavinng a NICE comment about my story.

ummmmmm.....

A nice comment about your story.
A little inappropriete but well written?
And really detailed.
And written by one of the coolest guys on fanpop.
A very nice gester to ermmmmmmmm.
And a little bitty bitty bit interesting after chappie one.
And confusing.
Is Thaila like not in the hunters now?
I will neva stop!
I think this is a very nice comment.
Now may I pwease stay?
I have two friends on dis story.
U and Mary.
I am still not that fond of Lt.
Or not that close to corrected to call them my friends.
But you and Mary are good buddies.
Especially Mary.
Especially both of ya'll.
I want gumbo!
But I live in Tennessee.
Wahhhhhh.
Whatever my dad makes it all the timd.
FALL BREAK!
NO SCHOOL!
NO BULLIES!
Shoot the other boy I like, J.T., is moving.

STOP!

This story is cool.
No other words will be typed from me.
Gosh

thankyou

welcome buddy

Thank u i am a good buddy aren't i? Lol!

is this forum abandoned>
because according to rules we cant have abandoned forums

MARY!OMG ARE U OKAY??!?!

I wazz wondering the same thing corrected




I feel like changing my profile pic :)

Hey wisegirl..... im.... better i guess......

Wow I've never seen you like this.
I think Imma be sad!
Cause ur my awesomest friend here and when ur sad im sad so now I'm sad

No dont be sad plz!

Im back bitches.

,,,,,,...................................

haha

1. say your name ten times.
2. say your mom's name five times.
.........3. say your crushes three times.
4. paste this to four other groups.
...If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday.
......But if you read this and do not paste this, then you
will have very bad luck.
SEND THIS TO 5 GROUPS IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOU'RE DONE PRESS F6 AND YOUR CHRUSH'S NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS ON THE SCREEN. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS (idk about this but i am up for the challenge XD)

noo

Hi I'm new here
i really don't think this should be rated r
i've read forums that are a lot more detailed
plus it annoys me when people continue stories and just ruin it
sorry aqualad

Goodbye

My EYES I'M ONLY 12

SREVES US RIGHT FOR READING A RATED R FORUM IDIOT

what the HADES did i just read??????????????????????????????????????­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???­???

IF PERCY AND ANNABETH HAD SEX IT WOULD NOT BE LIKE THIS IS JUST I CANT EVEN

Can you stop this forum? This forum is not nice to girls.

how come inaprofictions got deleted and not this one....?????

Crap.

If you dont like it, dont read it. Its rated R for a reason. Gosh.

stop posting this forum
and as i said before you ruined the forum

WHY WOULD ANYBODY MAKE A STORY ABOUT THAT?!

i'm gonna be honest, people who say things like "you shouldn't be writing things like this" "there's kids on here ffs!" etc, the person already warned you, it's like walking into a strip club and demanding them to stop their business... Lol or going to a party where you know people are doing drugs but you don't like it. If you remove other people's freedoms you're also taking away your own because you're demanding that they live in your style of "freedom"

The problem is that its going against the rules of this club. Simple as that. That and the way he wrote it. It was pretty distasteful. If he had wrote it well, I wouldn't have any problem with it. I admit that I read a lot of lemon stories *cough cough* but I would never call their writing trash or awful. Simply cause its good.. This is just vulgar.

*shrugs* just sayin, rules are rules but that's all they are, rules are broken all the time, you just gotta put up with the rule breakers until they grow out of it

@SamValdezLuv
so u have ur own idea of how percy and annabeth would do it?.....................thats just wrong

First of all WHAT?!?!
Second of all this could never happen.Thalia took a oath to the hunters that she would never have relationships with males.If she broke that oath the cost would be greatly!.!.

that didnt seem like a joke at all!

What in Hades did I just read... Oh, I remember. GARBAGE. This is a disgrace to you, Percy, Annabeth, Thalia, and Riordan. Stop writing. Please. Now.

DDUUUUDDDEEEEE!!!!! GROSS MUCH!!!!! SINCE WHEN INTHE NM OF HADES WOULD THALIA EVER EVEN THINK ABOUT DOING THAT.... INAPPROPRIATE INTERACTION!! GODS MAN, I'D RATHER FACE HADES THAN THINK ABOIUT THAT AGAIN!!!!!

...For some reason its not suprising that Aqualad wrote this... its just disappointing that a good series can be altered in such a degree that this could happen. why? what is the rational thinking behind making this forum. this is Heroes of Olympus, not a fan-fiction site.

Yeah, um I would like to point out that this has been almost completely made up of arguments with cuss words i ain't even gunna say. When is the story gonna continue?

You guys see this as a disgrace to PJO(which it is), but because of it's popularity I see it as a good place to advertise a story (I promise it's nothing like this piece of trash). My buddy parras2 is looking for a Beta for a story he is writing, if you are interested send him a PM or post on his wall. Link to summary: link

....goodbye childhood..... the innocence has been sucked from my soul. i will never be able to see Percabeth the same again .......................AND ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!!

PERCABETH WAS MY LIFE AND NOW I CAN THINK OF THEM WITHOUT REMEBERING THIS!!! I HATE YOU WHY MUST YOU HAVE DONE THIS TO ME!?!?!?!?!?!??!?! UGHHHH I WANNA JUST CRY NOW! THIS IS ALL SO WRONG!!! EVERY TIME I THOUGHT OF PERCABETH I WOULD SEE CUTE FLUFFY LITTLE SUBTLE THINGS LIKE LITTLE HUGS AND KISSES AND NOW I SEE THIS CRAP! WHY THE FUDGE?!?!?!?! UGHHHH! YOU'VE RUINED MY LIFE!!

MAY THE GODS HAVE MERCY ON YOUR SOUL!!

AND WHO WOULD SPEND THEIR TIME WRITING THIS CRAP?!?!?!?!?

Let me guess, you're eleven or twelve? ^^

This story is so shocking, and so not in Rick Riordan's style...

okay if people can get kicked off the hunters for dating a guy, i wonder what artemis would do if she found out her lead hunter stalked a couple through the woods, video taped them having sex, used the vidoe to blackmail them both into having sex with her, and gods know what else aqualad's gonna do...

i didnt read any other chapters fyi so thats how i dont know what else.....

i think we should report him.