Writing Descriptive Writing Game; Round One - Who described the scene the best?

This question is now closed
9 fans picked:
XDRoseLuvsHP
   44%
axemnas
   44%
opalrose
   11%
barbie91lala
no votes yet
 breebree446 posted over a year ago
Make your pick! | next poll >>
save

3 comments

user photo
link

1.opalrose: a caslte which you know would have a nice happy, yet simple feel if it wasn't for the blue light coming out of the swirling black clouds. they look like they are bringing a storm. all of the ground is rock but for a lone tree all of it encased in the blue light and clouds giving it a creepy yet powerful feel. i know something bad will happen to my people that i must help them but how? with it being so dark and cold i want to give up but can't.

2.XDRoseLuvsHP: The black clouds swirled around the deserted kingdom. The cold, empty kingdom stood strongly, but all life had been annihilated thousands of years ago, after the fires and winds and aggressive waters, as nature had unleashed it's unforgiving side, sending thousands of people to their violent, watery deaths - men, women and children alike - and over the years, the once thriving kingdom faded into nothing more than a memory, and finally, a myth. But it never disappeared. It stood strongly under water, still, waiting. The first signs of life were finally budding, after thousands of years. A single tree grew on a hill next to the vast kingdom. The kingdom, which once thrived with life and colour and happiness and festivity, once considered to be a paradise, was nothing more than deteriorating ruins in darkness, left to rot under tons of water. But the single tree standing left a shred of hope, and a column of light shone down on the ghastly kingdom in honor of that hope. Finally, finally. In just a few more decades, Atlantis would blossom once more.

3.barbie91lala: The nearly in ruins castle raised from the dark beneath looking proud and always haughty. The unfinishable labyrinths that lead to the main entrance were slowly falling apart, but keeping always that mistery and magic that made them unpassable.
Prisoners, citizens, merchants of ancient times looked up at it as for their God, but now, in the new era it was just an imponent building with lots of leyends and myths about that antique religion.
Foreigners could stop and admire, but the new generations of the local people were always afraid of the time it could happen again. Like now.
The black sky, dark as ever, started to swirl and brake into small parts. The light coming from above was so bright that none could stare, or feel any noise.
Suddenly the air became thick, and the fresh breeze that used to kindly caress women´s hairs, stoped and freezed every movement. That day had began.

4.axemnas: Ominous black shadowy clouds swirl around the air space of an ice coated mysterious castle. The only light being small shimmers threw cracks in the clouds Surrounded by lofty monstrous summits that seem to progress all the way to the heavens. Where the castle stops and the icy mountains begin is hazy. The stronghold seems to be carved out of the peaks. It seems like the type of residence Dracula as portrayed by Béla Lugosi in 1931 would be comfortable within. It seems to enclose a tragic clandestine within the parapets of the god forsaken fortress.
posted over a year ago.
last edited over a year ago
 
user photo
becca85 picked XDRoseLuvsHP:
I want to hear the rest of this one... :)
posted over a year ago.
 
user photo
r-pattz picked XDRoseLuvsHP:
They were all great, but this one was absolutely enchanting. :)
posted over a year ago.