The Heroes of Olympus Mark of Athena Fanfic, Rainbow Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
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over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
okay. i still have to do some writing homework. (blah)
so i dont no when i can post.
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
gah. dunno what to write right now. im kinda having a minor writers block.
over a year ago book-worm said…
For the homework or for the chappie?
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
hmmm
Sorry for your writers block :/
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
for the chappie.
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
I know youll come up.with something amazing! ^.^
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
thanks for the reassurance. but it would be great if u could give me a few ideas.
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
Ok... Maybe Reynas POV to see how she feels and whar she thinks of Jiper
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
okay. i guess.
over a year ago book-worm said…
Woot I'm excited!!!
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
Yay! :)
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
ill probably post tomorrow or thursday. im pretty busy.
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
Okay! Sounds good! :D :D
over a year ago book-worm said…
Woot woot!
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
yahhhhhh!
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
glad u guys r excited, but i have sooooo much homework its painful.
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
i have a math test tmmrw -_-
good luck with ur hmwrk
over a year ago book-worm said…
I hate homework....and tests...and school. I'm not even kidding if I could I would just write all day long!!!!(:
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
crap! i hafta study for science!
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
^ me too :(
over a year ago book-worm said…
I have to do math homework...but I need help on it so help is what I shall wait for. It's times like these I really wish I had a child of Athena around to help me with my homework
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
do u guys no what cornell notes r? theyre sooooo annoying!! and we have to do a whole chapter for history.
but ill try to work on the chappie.
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
heres a preview!!

Reyna
Disconnected. Dizzy. That only explained half of what Reyna felt. All she could see was blackness, and she couldn't seem to recall what had happened.
“Reyna!” a voice hissed. She turned around but saw nothing. “Reyna!” the voice called again. This time, its sounded like it was coming from everywhere, echoing inside her ears.
“Who's there?” she called out. Her voice sounded faint. A small wind brushed past her face, gentle and smooth, like her father had just brushed his hand against her cheek when she was small.
The memory brought back guilt and pain. It was her fault that her father died. Her fault.
Hylla had told her it wasn't, but the guilt was real.
She was brought out of her thoughts when the voice whispered, “Wake up Reyna! Wake up!”
Reyna tried to wake up. But she couldn't even move. The voice sounded familiar, and she tried to recall, but slowly the memory faded.
Then the darkness around her rippled and a scene appeared before her. Reyna gasped. It was the most beautiful place she had ever seen. She recognized the roads, shops, buildings, and temples Percy had described her. She realized she could move and started up the road. Then she saw it. The greatest place ever built on earth. She was on...
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
Olympus !?!
ooh reyna's dad ... interesting
tht was one of the hardest math test ever! no 90% this time :( probably 80%

posttt the resttt
over a year ago book-worm said…
Whoa! Cliffy not cool! Post soon!
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
I LOVE IT SO FAR! <3
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
okay guys, ill probably finish the chappie either tomorrow or saturday. im thinking that saturday is more likely cuz i have chinese school and trumpet and i still hafta work on a writing homework about the meaning of heroism. its supposed to be just the intro though. so if anyone can think of a beginning sentence, i would be GREATLY appreaciated.
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
blush
Okay... Um..

Sorry, but a sentence for what?
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
i hafta write an essay about the meaning of heroism, and i need to write the intro. but i dont no what to do for the beginning sentence.
over a year ago book-worm said…
hmmm
Maybe something like "what is heroism? Or What makes you hero? Maybe Can anyone be a hero?" if you can give me more details about whats supposed to be in the essay I could help more.
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
i haveeee a P.A Day and i slept through half of it xP

good luck with dat iris ...heroism was my schools focus last year
over a year ago book-worm said…
^i don't have next Friday! Or the Monday after that!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
i used to be a huge percabeth fan.. then i got old
over a year ago book-worm said…
I will never get old, I may age and life may go on but I refuse to ever truly grow up
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
me tooooooo

u're never too old no matter wht the facts state
mechdemigod commented…
ditto over a year ago
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
me too. like my dad. hes all grown, but sometimes, he acts more immature than me.
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
would u guys like to proof read my intro paragraph of my essay?
over a year ago book-worm said…
^HECK YES!!!
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
okay. i dont no if its good, but here u go.

Throughout the whole history of the world, during the battles of significant wars, when terrible accidents happen, only few portrays the true characteristics of a hero. It is the inside of a person that makes one a real hero, not based on strength, but by following the heart and doing what is right to save others. To become a true hero, one must show courage, loyalty and selflessness to all.
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over a year ago book-worm said…
^nice!!!!! It makes me want to read more!!!! Kept going your off to an AMAZING start!!!!(:
mechdemigod commented…
ditto over a year ago
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
i think it would fit better as a conclusion though. what do u think?
over a year ago book-worm said…
I think it would be perfect for either
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
^^^^^^^ Ikr.. My dad wont get me a new phone. I HAVE A FLIP PHONE. That may not seem so bad, but everybody at my school pretty much has an iphone, and theyre fascinated by mine as if theybhave never seen one before. And worse, its PREPAID by this little Kajeet carrier that nobody knows about. Im lucky if I get 2 bars in my own room. My dad promised me six months ago that Id get a new phone. A good one. But now he doesnt see the point. He wants toget me another prepaid phone from the same carrier.

Anyway i loved the intro
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
my dad has a flip phone and he DOESNT want to get an iphone cuz he doesnt like apple. i have an android LG lucid. its 4G. i wanted an iphone 5, but we didnt no when it would come out, so i got my phone over the summer, then it announce that the iphone 5 is going to be delivered on MY BDAY!!!
i was just like, soooo NOT COOL!!
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
^ 1. How do you NOT want an Iphone?!
2.Lucid, huh? I'll look that up...
3. Ouch. That really sucks
over a year ago book-worm said…
I have an iphone(: that's what I'm on right now, actually that's what I'm on a lot of the time. @kkw don't worry I know a billion kids with sucky flip phone, at least you have a phone!(:
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
yeah. my friend has a flip phone too. dont worry. ur not the only one.
over a year ago book-worm said…
My first phone was a flip phone, I had it until like, march so I haven't had this one very long
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
well, i just got my 1st phone over the summer, sooo....
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
tongue
i have no phone 8( just an iPod ... i noe it's sad but only 2 or 3 in my grade have phones so im alrite

my daddy just a phone with touch screen and he doesnt noe how to use it... touches it like he's scared tht he'd mess sumthin up....

all in all flip phone betta than no phone or in my daddy's case