The Heroes of Olympus Mark of Athena Fanfic, Rainbow Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
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over a year ago darange said…
zzz
Yay I'm all caught up!!!!! AHHHHHH poor frank!!!!!
Well that was a good chapter! Butim going to bed right now cause its 12:00AM so ya goodnight!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
It was 12:34 AM When I last posted.
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
rainbow! ur back!!!!!!! yah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
Sigh. still cant sign in on my laptop. but ill start working on the chappie. maybe by that time, my computer would work. Or i could find a way to email myself and post using my dads computer....
stupid computer. i hate my laptop. it keeps on malfunctioning.
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Oh wow... Getting mad at a laptop. When you get mad at inanimate objects you know your almost as crazy as me.
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
angelic
LOL. good to no cinnomin!
I staeted on the chappie, butni have a huge concert today, so i wont have time to work on it.
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
ahah i yell at a lot of things.... xD

i hate computers...im not good with em'

my best wishes that ur computer will work :')
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
:) I have 22 by Taylor Swift stuck in my head. Did I mention I'm obsessed with Taylor Swift?
over a year ago demigod324 said…
I haven't been able to log on to Fan pop from my laptop for about 3 weeks now...so i just use my nook
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I'm not allowed on the laptop so I use my iPhone 3G. Now I have Change by Taylor Swift in mah head!
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
I LOVE taylor swift!!
And bad news, MY LAPTOP IS STILL NOT COOPERATING!!!
also, ill probably have less and less time on fanpop, but this forum is NOT abandoned.
i will continue w/ the chapters, even if im not on.
and curse my laptop.
over a year ago seaistruth said…
Love Taylor swift I have Starlight stuck in my head poo post when u can its
Amazing full
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I am the BIGGEST Swifty in my class! I have all her albums. Red -Limited edition! My niece is sleeping over.Stay stay stay is stuck dans mon tete!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Lol teamleo(I totally agree w/ Ur UN)
over a year ago teamleo said…
crying
why are u BREAKING EVERYONE UP???????????????????? since it is ur story i guess i have to except it but i am in my room on the verge of crying :( PLZ PLZ PLZ, whatever u do DON'T BREAK UP PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I KNOW RIGHT! I liked the Jasper Pairing.
over a year ago teamleo said…
sad
ME TOO!!!! Them not bieng together is kinda wierd for me.
over a year ago darange said…
heart
LOL! Team Peeta or team Gale? Hades no! IM TEAM LEO!!!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
^EXACTLY!!!!!!! Darange, consider yourself on my friend list!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
sick
BREAK UP PERCABETH ITS MY LAST WISH!!!! before..... i........ di- ie............. BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP........ BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP.

"Sir we've lost the patient"
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
^WHAT!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
^^Kills him even more!
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
PERCABETH?!? *murderous face* HECK NOOOOOO .... *helps cinnomin kill Lt more*

LEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO<333333
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
*Chops him into eraser shavings before giving it to Mrs.O'Leary*
I LOVE LEO!!!!
JASPER, PERCABETH AND FRAZEL ARE FREAKIN AWESOME!
over a year ago seaistruth said…
Somebody put sugar in there cereal *Demeter*- "less sugar more wheat!" Me- " shut up!"
Her "boom" me "backing away slowly slower turn around run!!!!! Me- " whew that's was close," anyway I kinda been thinking that braking Percabeth would be a good Idea but then I think (it's so beautiful) then never break up ever!!! Sob
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
^EXACTAMANDO!!!!
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
I AM NEVER BREAKING UP PERCABETH!!!!!!!
i only broke up jiper and fazel because i wanted to add some drama. and i have my own ideas for piper.
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
THNK GAWDDDDDDDD

ohhh...piper
over a year ago demigod324 said…
Pelease don't hurt me but* say the next sentence in a whisper* i wouldn't care all that much if you killed percabeth* finishes the sentence then runs to the safety of my desk*
over a year ago seaistruth said…
^^Good! Percabeth must stay together no matter how good the drama might be but on the others I admire your courage and inventiveness for braking up Jiper and fazel it does add some drama now I'm on edge and crazy so post!!!!
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over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
O.O
over a year ago teamleo said…
cool
Thank the GAWDS u r not going to breakup percabeth!!!!!!! If u did would request u be sent on a permanent trip to the underworld
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
I might not post in a long time cuz my laptop is STILL not cooperating with fanpop, and i have less and less time on fanpop cuz i hafta prepare for a bunch of competitions and tests.
over a year ago teamleo said…
crying
That makes me sad, very very sad
over a year ago seaistruth said…
crying
Why world why??? Waaaaaa
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
:'( *sniffle*
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
crying
And its thankgiving break and i have to do a lot of theory and painting and calligraphy practice!!!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
crying
Eyes eyes
T
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A
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over a year ago seaistruth said…
crying
Cinnomin what? Rainbow that makes me sooo sad waaaaaa your life should revolve around posting ( I know I'm seriously messed up) sob sniffle
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
It's a written face.
over a year ago seaistruth said…
Ohhhh..... ( I'm about as dumb as kelp head)
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Nah, I didn't think n e one would get it.
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
Yeah.... i was also confused....
i havent had time to work on the chappie, so please be patient.
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Ok:) I'm
Trying to good girl. I just had a 3-way conference with my mom me and my teacher. My mom was proud of me and I'm happy about that.
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
Lol..... me.... why do i do this...... I was skimming through your guyses comments and at first i read, 3-way with my mom me and my teacher. Lolz.... then i actually read it and i was like oh....
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
What in the world? IM TWELVE! That would be SERIOUSLY odd!
over a year ago seaistruth said…
Ok let's not think that way trying to not go on a screaming rampage and not demand rainbow to post or else....so hard...
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Going...
To....
SNAP!!!!
POST!!!!
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
Gah! Im having a writers block so it might take a while for me to finish this chappie. sooo sorry guys!
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Ok... Will someone check out my story? It's called Alice's story and it at the Harry Potter and Percy Jackson rp club.please!!!! Post when you can Iris!